rate_review Reviews

Wow! That was just heartbreaking. But beautiful.

Oh God, I was just put on anti-depressants, but this is totally making me cry. It's so beautiful! I thought the ending was going to be horrifyingly sad and lonely, but it was tragically beautiful, or beautifully tragic, either way. And my fiance just disappeared (I honestly think he killed himself. >_>) and now I misss himmmmm. :(
But dude, this was seriously so amazing. I hope you've written a lot more! I'm going to go check! ^_^

i love this story it was so good. it made me cry!

You blew me away!

...only left with one thing to say...really, it is the choice that defines us, it is the choice that makes us what we are!

I think that was one of the coolest stories I have ever had the privilege of reading. Bravo!
--RD

Beautiful...

oh, boy. i was fighting tears after 'married'. bet its not nessesary to say i was sobbing at the end. it hurts to loose someone the way they did. it just happend too often , even in the real world. makes me wish we all had more time.

Oh god. That was so good. It made me so sad, my stomach hurts. :(

Oh God you had me in tears! Usually these sort of stories try to make the emotions the characters feel resonate through the words but can't succeed, I have to tell you that this did exactly that. I felt what the characters were feeling and just burst into tears from the way everything was expressed, this truly is a beautiful piece of art. I'll definitely be looking into your other works but maybe not for a day or so if they're tragedies such as this was, I can't take more than one emotional tumble a day! Again, it was indeed a very heartfelt and beautiful piece and the ending was perfect, thank you for posting this.