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for Smokey Haze

by bellgirl

person Elleinad
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. A plot that I haven't seen before. haha.
Please update soon! Its really good. I can't wait to read more!

--Philyra♫
person mona
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like it so far. i wonder where they will go. this is well writen and flows nicely. i love your stories. i am turning into a huge fan of yours. please update soon!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.

I like the descriptions and how you got the atmosphere, also I think that they're fairly in character.

I'm intrigued.
person Britt
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
off to a good start. Malfoys forage with the sleeping man for his flask, was...in need of some back-story...lol keep it up!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more!!

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