schedule
May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore the last line! :)
schedule
March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not usually my favorite pair, but this was written very well. I would read more of tihs pair if it was always written this well. Good job on the characters. The end sorta made me a little sad.
schedule
March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. With a short format you got everything in and those two together set my computer table on fire. One request: when each person is speaking (or thinking, etc.) can you make it a new paragraph? That makes it much easier to read. I got a bit confused who was talking at first.
Lovely smut! Thanks!
Lovely smut! Thanks!
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A really, really good and hot one. Definitely deserves to be continued, one way or another. :) We just all love our smut in the dungeon... ;)
schedule
March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, scrummy smut! I love these two together! Very well written and very hot - I hope you write more!