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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I just got 10 e-mails telling me that there was new reviews on my stories. I think AFF is having problems at the moment. Thank you for the review, it really means alot to me. These two are my first stories and I was really nervous about publishing them. I wasn't sure if anyone would like my writing style. I do have a third part to this little series already started. I'm hoping to have it published within a week. Thanks for your reviews.

Chapter 1: I followed your name from my story. (Scratches head) I may have followed your name a few months ago, but there were no stories then. Lovely surprises this time. 8-)

You certainly have a nice way with the physical intertwining of two people. I could feel Hermione's frustration when Charlie slowed down her attempt to get him into bed. I really like how you pay attention to the small details of a seduction, writing so we can 'see' what's going on, movement by movement.

Oooh, lovely detail of the tattoo dragon. Sexy! The whip was a surprise. I had thought they were a strawberries and cream type of couple and then I get shocked by the whip. HOT, HOT, HOT. Nice twist. I don't have much sense of Charlie Weasley as a character in the books or movies. This story brings him to life. Thanks for writing this luscious one-shot.

OMG! That was so hot. I actually think I read this somewhere else, but I noticed you didn't have any reviews so here I am Reviewing your wonderfully sexy story!
I actually like the thought of Charlie & Hermione. I'm so used to R/Hr and then got into D/Hr too. Read a few LM/Hr and SS/Hr/H (Woah, that one had me gasping for breath by the end LOL)