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by cria31

schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Oh my, don't worry about your concern. You completely slipped it by me. That was great! I do like the two Slytherins starting to see each other as friends. Well, friend on one side, and a useful thing on the other. As the one gets the measure of the other one better, though, I think the relationship will be much more equal, causing irritation to 'Mister Magnanimous' Malfoy.

Very cute idea. Loved it.
person sigridir
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Has potential, but needs to be reviewed and edited thoroughly by a beta first.
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome! One chapter dedicated to me? Wow! ;)
As for your other story in the Original section, I'll try to read it as soon as possible. I will be rather busy for the next 3 weeks, though, so please bear with me if I don't review for a long time. Thank you.

By the way, thx a lot for your review on my story! :)
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It took me some time until I finally realized that they are still students. You built that up very well, making people first believe it's the present, but not past. As for me, I'd love to see this one turning into more than a one-shot. It definitely looks promising, so please continue! I'm your rapt reader... :)