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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I loved how Hermione reacted when Lucius fired the curse. I look forward to reading more soon to see what he has her do for detentions. As for pairing Draco with someone, go for it. He needs a girlfriend. I think it would be interesting if he were paired with Elkara.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pair Draco with someone. Great story! Please add more soon
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: It looks like love is in the air. Hermione is feeling left out of all the romance? She doesn't have to look any farther than the platinum-haired senior Malfoy (I wouldn't anyway). She's so lucky. I wonder what Draco wants to say to her? Will there be a tug-of-war between father and son over Hermione? No contest - Lucius wins. 8-)
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Oooh, truth or dare with veritaserum. Wicked. And it
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: I admit I would hate Elkara too, if she interrupted a dream like that. It
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey its okay. short is okay, it makes good transitions. and a great start up-again. :) i know it has been a while sense you last posted so this is just a starter. right? i love that lucius is jealeous and i cant wait to see what will happen! so please post soon. :)
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that Hermione will give Lucius a chance. I think they could be very happy together. However if she feels nothing for him later, she can just tell him it's over. I look forward to reading more soon.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i like this so far...but the author's notes in the middle of the story are a bit annoying.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.