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April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved it even though the ending broke my heart.
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December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sarah,
Over the last few nights you have taken me on one hell of a rollercoaster ride and I am exhausted, exhilarated, turned on beyond all measure, and all cried out! Dear God woman are you trying to kill me?! *grins*
This is by far THE BEST dark Harry Potter fic I have read and I congratulate you thoroughly on writing such an engaging and character driven story. Hermione is by far my favourite character and getting to see her so dark, untamed and wild was absolutely breathtaking and made me fall in love with her all over again. I love how she was drawn to Draco and Blaise and how you played out their seduction of her, it was nice to see her go to them of her own free will, and even though you wrote her so OCC, it was completely believable. I firmly believe that there is a certain amount of darkness in all of us, it's just what you choose to do with it that decides how you will live your life.
I am by far and away a Harry/Hermione shipper at heart, but I have fallen in love too with Harry/Draco, Hermione/Draco, Harry/Draco/Hermione, Draco/Blaise/Hermione and pretty much any other combination of the four together (yeah, yeah, I'm a big ol' slut *grins*) So, getting a chance to see the sexy Slitheryn boys completely possess our Hermione in all ways was so very yummy.
I loved the whole premise of this story, it was dark, exciting, full of excellent plot twists and turns, and made you want to keep reading to find out what the next thrilling interlude was going to be. You kept the balance of plot, smut, romance and intrigue finely tuned to keep us hanging on and begging for more. I am so glad that I came to this story in its completed version, cause I'm not sure I would have been able to be patient and take it in instalments!
There really is only one gripe I do have, and that is your improper use of 'then' when it should be 'than' and 'to' when it should be 'too'. It was a bit distracting for me, as I am a well known Grammar Nazi, and so I found myself continually correcting it throughout the story. It didn't mar my overall enjoyment of the piece, as you can see, but it was enough of a distraction to annoy me.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us, it has been an absolute pleasure to read. I cannot wait to read the sequel now and find out what has happened to our beloved characters, and to hopefully get the happy ending I am so desperately wishing for.
Thank you again!
Aby
>^..^<
Over the last few nights you have taken me on one hell of a rollercoaster ride and I am exhausted, exhilarated, turned on beyond all measure, and all cried out! Dear God woman are you trying to kill me?! *grins*
This is by far THE BEST dark Harry Potter fic I have read and I congratulate you thoroughly on writing such an engaging and character driven story. Hermione is by far my favourite character and getting to see her so dark, untamed and wild was absolutely breathtaking and made me fall in love with her all over again. I love how she was drawn to Draco and Blaise and how you played out their seduction of her, it was nice to see her go to them of her own free will, and even though you wrote her so OCC, it was completely believable. I firmly believe that there is a certain amount of darkness in all of us, it's just what you choose to do with it that decides how you will live your life.
I am by far and away a Harry/Hermione shipper at heart, but I have fallen in love too with Harry/Draco, Hermione/Draco, Harry/Draco/Hermione, Draco/Blaise/Hermione and pretty much any other combination of the four together
I loved the whole premise of this story, it was dark, exciting, full of excellent plot twists and turns, and made you want to keep reading to find out what the next thrilling interlude was going to be. You kept the balance of plot, smut, romance and intrigue finely tuned to keep us hanging on and begging for more. I am so glad that I came to this story in its completed version, cause I'm not sure I would have been able to be patient and take it in instalments!
There really is only one gripe I do have, and that is your improper use of 'then' when it should be 'than' and 'to' when it should be 'too'. It was a bit distracting for me, as I am a well known Grammar Nazi, and so I found myself continually correcting it throughout the story. It didn't mar my overall enjoyment of the piece, as you can see, but it was enough of a distraction to annoy me.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us, it has been an absolute pleasure to read. I cannot wait to read the sequel now and find out what has happened to our beloved characters, and to hopefully get the happy ending I am so desperately wishing for.
Thank you again!
Aby
>^..^<
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. But the ending made me cry.
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely fabulous story.... How could you end it that way??!!??!! Leaving Hermione like that made me want to cry. I really hope you have a sequel and if you don't that you write one. Thanks for such an awesome read!!!!! =)
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg..
took me maybe 5 hours to read your story... this one only... going to start on part two tomorrow..
omg... im hooked
10/10
have you posted on any other sites.. like
hpfandom.net or harrypotterfanfiction.com
like omg...
if i ever get my hands on harry or ron...
i dont care if i not magical... i will make them
with they were never born...
im not officially in love with the hg/bz/dm ship...
*drool*
took me maybe 5 hours to read your story... this one only... going to start on part two tomorrow..
omg... im hooked
10/10
have you posted on any other sites.. like
hpfandom.net or harrypotterfanfiction.com
like omg...
if i ever get my hands on harry or ron...
i dont care if i not magical... i will make them
with they were never born...
im not officially in love with the hg/bz/dm ship...
*drool*
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so i found this story when you updated the sequel and decided i had to try it I LOVE draco and hermione and throwing in blaise is even better!!!!!!! i really like how you have thing s changing withing the golden trio.... i do like the darker side of hermione.... and i love how you write their shared dreams very well done... not to long but long enough to be full of detail.....i hope you continue on with the sequel i can not wait to get there
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless...This is one of the best fics I've ever read...and...I can't find the right words to describe what I feel right now... this story really made me cry a LOT, 'cause it's like my own story...The man I love is not with me... And I'm stuck with someone I don't love... and the worst thing is that my lover and me, we both feel the same, but we can't be together... Too many people will be against it, my own family... please write more... I need a happy ending... Because I can't have my happy ending... Please...
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story cant wait to read the sequel!
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a sad ending draco better not be dead I want them to be toegther!!
*DB*
*DB*
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO... I xcant believe she married Ron..... No No