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for Sectumsempra Animi

by smichiba

person Jicky
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
argh! cliffhanger!!!
i can't wait to know wut'll happen to the war, to Draco, n to Harry!
how will Regulus come into the story?
is Draco really falling in love w/ Harry, slowly?
n i'm so confused with that vault visit!
so Hermione didn't see wut happened in the vault? n Ron don't remeber?
hope u'll have that explained in the future!
oh Narcissa was actually nice.
n of cuz i love seeing Severus too, thou i'm thinkin he might force Draco to administer the antidote in the future...
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well first, for some reason part of the chapter is repeated. I'm guessing there was a glitch or something.

And second, talk about poetic justice. I don't feel sorry for Draco at all, not even the slightest bit. He worked up this 'prank' without any care as to the effect it would have on Harry, Harry's life, and the people that Harry cares about. Harry didn't kill his mother, he did. And I wouldn't care if he wallowed in his guilt for the rest of his life. The only problem now is that he'll likely make Harry suffer because he doesn't want to face the fact that it's his own fault.

God I'm hoping for Draco to get it at the end. I don't I've ever disliked him more in a story. I'm not even sure if I've ever disliked any character more.
person Annie
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh damn the smut was wonderful! I wonder when the guilt will catch up to Draco when realizes he's taking advantage of Harry. Can't wait for more!
person misslala
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Draco still hasn't learned yet... he's still just using Harry. I wonder how long it will take him to give up and let himself enjoy everything even though it's wrong. I don't know of you have an email update list or not, but would you please email me when you update? I missed two chapters and didn't know it! LOL I love this story! It's so well written and the angst is incredible. Hope to see an update soon!

lmay3@carolina.rr.com
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.
person Mitamay
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I think he's falling for Harry! Talk about backfire! EM
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! So Severus is playing off that he knows nothing. That he didn't practically hand the potion to Draco! What happens when Draco give him the antidote? Must have more!
person misslala
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do I see a change in Draco's little plan, things not going quite as he had hoped? I wanna know what the latin means! lol Why is it so significant? What scared Draco so much about what was in that vault?
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Snape knows. Even if he doesn't tell on Draco, I doubt he'd let it continue on too long. Especially at the potential detriment of himself and all the people around them. Though if he does eventually get Draco to end it, that would be telling on himself in a way since the feelings Harry had would suddenly disappear and make it clear to the others, though they already clearly suspect, that something odd was going on. Or Harry himself will remember that something was wrong.

This story is in the Harry/Draco section so I imagine they might end up together at the end, but in this case I'm hoping they don't. I don't care how lonely he is or whatever, that's something you just don't do. I'm feeling such extreme disgust for him at this point, unless something extreme happened to change my opinion of him I would be really unhappy if Harry ended up with him. What's he doing to him... *shakes head* And for no good reason.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no... Draco's emotions are getting in the way of his revenge! If only someone had told him in advance that love was a double-edged sword. Now he's going to fall hopelessly in love with Harry and be in the reverse position when the potion is reversed and Harry is no longer the one under his spell. Mwhahahhaa... good story. I can't wait to see it all play out. ^^