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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely not lol to short more soon please.helena
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what do i think??? humm.... just give me a moment ... i think that you should be up-dating right now... that wasnt a very long chapter and im dying to read more... so up-dates soon will ya?
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You go way to fast.
You have alot of gramatical or downright weird wording.
Malfoy is to informal and slangy.(*is complaining about informalness and uses madeup words*LOl)
You need a beta.
I love Wumpscut.
I like the story though. Most people who make our Harry a goth, arn't. I danced and ran off to find my Wumpscut CD when you mentioned them.
But really, If you want a Beta I would love to help.
Jane,
Pure_serpent@hotmail.com
You have alot of gramatical or downright weird wording.
Malfoy is to informal and slangy.(*is complaining about informalness and uses madeup words*LOl)
You need a beta.
I love Wumpscut.
I like the story though. Most people who make our Harry a goth, arn't. I danced and ran off to find my Wumpscut CD when you mentioned them.
But really, If you want a Beta I would love to help.
Jane,
Pure_serpent@hotmail.com
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intresting... is Lucius slowly making him a sub or something? humm... up-dates soon please!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dang you dang you! Are they?
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intresting... happened abit fast im thinking but oh well up-dates soon please!
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh nice very nice.. keep it up.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Draco isn't into Harry seeing as Harry's going to be with his father and not him. Please update soon. ^__^
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really wanna see your next chapter.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter