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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, i wonder what the changes shell be going through soon will be... and id assume shes going to need a new name because obviously they would know granger and stuff.... hmmm...
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fab chapter! Only thing I can ask for is more of it!!! I'm dying to see them at each others throats lol! :D Cheers mate!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, a lovely chapter dearest. I love the "Get flushed" line! ^__~ And veeeeery clever, sneaking in your penname. Didn't think I'd noticed didja? LoL Only a few little things I noticed that were out of sync. It's "Lupin", not "Lupus".
Do you have a BETA? I'd be willing to proofread for grammatical errors and the like, if you're interested. Email me at moonstar_75@hotmail.com if you are.
Update again soon!!
Do you have a BETA? I'd be willing to proofread for grammatical errors and the like, if you're interested. Email me at moonstar_75@hotmail.com if you are.
Update again soon!!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant start dearest! You have me hooked! You managed to pull off a surly Malfoy, a nervous Ron, a fumbling Harry and a 'Soon-to-be-made-over' Hermione off, all in one chapter! Definitely praise worthy!
Update again soon, luv! I look forward to the rest of the story!
Update again soon, luv! I look forward to the rest of the story!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great start! Can't wait to see Hermione's "changes" and Draco's reaction! :)
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the story...but I hate it when they underuse Hermione...maybe she should be the one to kill voldie in the end ;) Can't wait to see how things play with Malfoy!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it will be interesting and I'mm looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE FEED ME MORE