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for Trials Undercover

by Iheartcake

person luvhp
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far, hope you update soon.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I really do and I wish there were more like right now! But you had all these little weird marks where your quotation marks, periods, and such are. That was kind of annoying but the story was good. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!
person JaynaM
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More soon

Jayna
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schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I like the fact that they have to pretend to be engaged and live together and everything. I can't wait until Hermione has to wear her new clothes and what's going to happen when she does and Draco has to show possession of her. Well I hope you update soon.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! I little OOC from Hermione but I really love how you are getting to the story, I wish to read more pretty soon, so we can find out how they are going to find out about feelings, I wish she would go out and buy a complete new wardrobe, for everyday life, and shock them on how goog she looks now with the makeover, and why didn't Harry or Ron say anything to her about it?

Great one!! Update soon!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bwhaaaaaaa!!!!! *snort* "indoor voice!!!!" oh, but I love the tension building with these two!!! where they finally get beyond the anger...look out!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. I really like this it has a good plot and they are in character. I just wish the chapter's were a little longer. Well with that said I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it.
person Magali
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey nice story although a bit too short... i hope you'll update soon, and will there be any more dramione actions except from fighting ? would be great!