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for Cheaper By The Dozen

by CryingCinderella

schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor sev cant take a bath in peace ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Becky
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love stories like this one. It gives Snape a family man feel and it a nice change. Please post soon.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.

person Ducky
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, brilliant chappie, again! That scene in the bath reminds me of something that happened to me, except it was the in-laws, not the kids!!!

KEEP WRITING THIS FIC, I just keep logging on to see if you've written more!
person DB1
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@3. Lol, awesome story! hehe severus is a little ooc, its cool to see a story with severus as a 'family man' as he hates teaching! update soon

*DB*
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Ducky
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another BRILLIANT chapter! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. They kinda are like the Weasleys, only in a hemrione and Severus way! What is the competition going to be like? I have brilliant pictures i my my mind of Severus having to see how many kids he can fit in a mini van or something! This is going to be good, keep up the good work.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOLLLLL!!! omg..... this is hilarious!! Although I can't picture my favorite pair in this role, the story is very absorbing and fun. Please continue, you're doing a fantastic job.
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.