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That was..different. I liked it. I didn't like that Harry and Draco had so many..issues. But I did like the story. Very well written.

you soooo HAVE to do a sequel to this! it's too beautiful!

Okay, I just reread my reviews from previous chapters, and OMFG I'm a freakin lunatic! That was seriously one of THE most ADD things I've ever read, but I know it made sense to me WHILE I was writing it. (Note that after this revelation, I am going to proceed to--most likely--review the final two chapters in precisely the same way.) This is me sane...below is me banished to the depths of insanity by your exquisite story! *giggle* On to the new chapter!

Chapter 6--*big sigh* I'm caught up again...just finished reading Chapter 5 and clicked "next chapter"....my heart is beating so wildly right now, and I'm tearing up...haha I'm such a fucking perverted sap.

*crying* Halfway through the third paragraph (the second long one) and I'm already a fucking mess...how great is that? Draco!!!! OH MY GOD Draco!!!

Snape loved...Lily?? And had to watch as she died at Voldemort's hand? Who is the "her"?

OH. MY. GOD. Harry...Draco...Harry can bring him around, right? WTF?? What...the...FUCK??? Remus? Remus Lupin, I'm going to assume you're trying to help but WHAT THE FUCKING HELL??????

WHAT THE BLOODY FUCKING HELL IS GOING ON?????? I'M SO GODDAMN CONFUSED HERE!!!!!! *brain explodes* WHAT THE FUCK???? LUPIN, YOU MONSTROUS ASSHOLE YOU BETTER HAVE A FUCKING GOOD REASON TO BE TOUCHING MY DRACO LIKE THAT OR I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU I SWEAR TO GOD!!!!!

WHAT ABOUT HERMIONE??? WHAT THE FUCK ABOUT HARRY!!!!!! YOU HAD BETTER HAVE A MASTER PLAN, WOLF-BOY, AND IT HAD BETTER BE DAMN GOOD BECAUSE I'M SO FUCKING PISSED OFF AT YOU RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What the HELL is your problem???????

WHAT WAHT THATFASDJIO;F ASINOG;WEOINGQaoi;fz foasd what the FUCK IS THIS DOING IN THE HARRY/DRACO SECTION?????? WHAT THE FUCK???? (plot twist...didn't see coming...)

*crying again* WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE???????

Chapter 7--I'm a fucking goddamn basket case, but I can't stay away.



broken now

Sequel!!! Do they ever get back together? Who wins?

I soooo need chapter 6! What happens next?

Chapter 4--YIPPEE!!!! An update!!! I am positive it will hold delicious tortures that I am positively sick for enjoying!!! *shrug* Onward!

OMG I can't even imagine...*shudder* I'm crying! OH MY GOD Harry! Draco! I didn't want this!! NO NOT THAT! Harry!

*it'll be okay*it'll be okay*it'll be okay* I'm just in shock right now...I'll be okay later...

Chapter 5--midnight! midnight! PLEASE DEAR GOD LET IT BE MIDNIGHT NOW! OH MY GOD REMUS LUPIN YOU'RE MY HERO!!!

crying turned to sobbing as I type this.....Draco......Harry......"love" OH MY FUCKING GOD GET THEM OUT OF THERE!

NO! YES! GET HIM OUT OF--oh fuck!!! LUCIUS!! YES, DO IT, DRACO, DO IT!!! REMUS?!?!??!???!?!!?!!! WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU????????????????? DO IT!!!!

FUCK YEAH, HERMIONE!!!! LEAVE IT TO THE WOMAN!!!!!! DAMN BABY I LOVE YOU!!!!! YOU GO GIRL!!!!! THANK FUCKING GOD!!!!!!

OH MY GOD YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!!! DRACO'S HANGING ON BY A THREAD.....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T CRACK HIM! He has to be okay, and Harry will be okay! Please???!?!?!??!!? Think of your readers and their sanity!!!! Think of the kittens!

Oh how horrible! Need chapter 5!

Okay, I just reread your warning from the first chapter...*whimper* No happily ever after? (I'll have to create my own, then, if this particular story doesn't have one) GOD I'm such a masochist because I LOVE to put myself through this torture! And I applaud you for not pulling punches and writing about dark stuff. And I'm excited about the plot! My only sin (Slytherin....weakness = sin) is that I always want the "Harry and Draco happily ever after" so that being said, I'm quite nervous about reading this story now...nervous AND excited...but I've already read the first two chapters and am hooked SO......for better or worse, I'll be coming back often!

(Although your writing IS exquisite, so that makes me wonder if you can make a "bad" ending good....we'll see. At any rate, I'll probably still be howling and cursing and crying no matter what, so if you don't mind that *grins* we'll get along just fine!)

Chapter 3--OMFG I haven't read a word of it yet, and I'm ready to jump out of my skin with anticipation!!!!!! FUCK OH SHIT OH SHIT OH FUCKINGMERLINGODDAMNYOUVOLDEMORTYOUFUCKINGBASTARD SHIT!

*WHIMPER AND OUTRIGHT CRYING* Draco! Harry! OH MY FUCKING GOD (PS I've never seen that breakfast twist done in a story before!)

OH HERMIONE I COULD KISS YOU!!!!! YES I LOVE YOU! GOOD GIRL! GOOD HERMIONE! I will allow you to touch Draco's neck.....that is okay. *permission granted*

Oh god....your chapters....I am positively RIVETED the entire time! You've gotten your hooks in my and aren't letting go!