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for All the Sincerity of a Whore's Kiss

by Darkate

schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo begging you to write a sequel!
person lietothedevil
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dear god, that was angsty. love it. feel like bawling. poor draco. poor harry to i suppose, but poor draco. love the title.
person kanui
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I just have some difficulties understanding the end. What does Draco think when he discovers Harry knew? And what did Harry think?
person laney
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this oneshot. Could you make it into a longer story?
person Jien
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* WAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! please make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
person NightLo
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I must admit, I am a serious fan for DM/HP, and I only read far less fewer HP/DM fics...but this piece is just great, beautifully written and laid. It is true that every emotion and feeling is expressed in details, we can just imagine and feel it in the VERY air, so I find I am compiled to review and thanked for this piece of art.

BTW, I have enjoyed most of your fics on your livejournal, and I am especially attached to the piece of "Stay with me 'til morning'...
person DracosWish
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was just wonderful, the feel of it all it was like you could feel the emotions coming from draco and harry, it was just wow, you are truely an excellent writer and I thank you for writing this piece I hope there will be a sequal!
person graballz
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD, THAT WAS AMAZING AND HEARTBREAKING AND I'M GONNA CRY NOW BECAUSE IT'S SO TRAGIC!!!!!! Fuuuuuuuuuuck I KNEW it was going to have a sad ending (I cheated and read the reviews before the story) and so I had prepared myself, but nothing (do you hear me? NOTHING) could've prepared me for this!!!!!

This can't be just a oneshot! It CAN'T! (Harry needs to put a stop to Draco's way of earning a living, they both need to get the Nicotine patch, and fuck each other into oblivion, not because Draco's being paid for it, but because they're in love and that's what they want!!!!! PLEASE My traumatized little heart needs to be glued back together!)
person Leenah
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! Not finish. Please continue. I wish for some sort of happy ending. Please.
A most fantastic fic, and so erotic and sad at the same time. Wonderful.

Leenah.
person sunset20
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I made the terrible mistake of reading this before going to university today. You have absolutely no idea how difficult it was to concentrate during my lessons, because whenever this story came to my mind I was like: "GIVE ME A CUPBOARD OF MY OWN WHERE I CAN CRY MY SOUL OUT, AND GIVE IT TO ME NOOOOOW!!!". Ok, this was supposed to sound better, but it basically covers what I feel. Anyway, the story... no actually, the feelings that you have so wonderfully described in the stroy kept haunting me all day, so here I am, hoping that if I review, those ghosts will find peace and leave me alone. :)) I absolutely adored this story, and unlike other readers, I think it was a good decision to have this sad ending, it was powerful and heartbreaking!!! I loved every bit of it! Thank you so much for this! OK, now I'm off to read your other stories...:)))