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for Angry Clouds

by SoriaUndead

person KCRae
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh I love it and I can't wait for more!! Okay I will now refer to you as ferret because I have satisfied my mongoose urges with my closest friends and co-workers! :) I am so psyched for chapter 4. Great job! ps. love the weasley twins, you write them wonderfully. As for Draco, tsk-tsk. I'm never one for the enjoyed rape, but even I admit it would be in Draco's character to do something like that. so rock on my ferrety friend, rock on!
person Danine
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit!! Where to begin?!?!? The twins were amazing, I adore them! And Draco... holy... omg, rape rape rape but hot and porr Harry!! HARRY OMG WAKE UP, he needs a loving hug and Draco needs to appreciate what he's done and hug and kiss him and say sorry! I'm blown away! I'm absolutely blown away!! And Ginny, poor thing... or not! Omg Draco, bad boy. BAD. That was so hot though, I'm such a pervert!

Thank you so much for dedicating the most fucking awesome chapter EVAR to me!!! Love you!!!!
person KCRae
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued mongoose. I think since you are new at this that all experianced writers should call you mongoose because that is just so fabulous. I marvel at YOUR cleverness!! I can't wait for more and hope that Harry doesn't stay quite so...sadistic. :)-madness
person tie me up. tie me down.
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. Harry is not a happy camper. Make him happy!!!!
person Jicky
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww heartless Harry. understand his hate towards poor darling Draco, but still how could he be left to suffer. slaps Harry, com'on get back there and comfort him >_< n why is he so upset all in ch2? beta yet, why is all of ch2 just "get out" or "what the fuck"? @_@ ??? seriously, i know it's probably part of hwo u want the story, but there needs to be something more. i look forward to ch3
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow thats quite some anger harry's got there... I am most intrigued! Update soon :D
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!
person Danine
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so lovely. I adore your writing skills, especially with the twins and Ron. Please, please continue!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! Harry was letting him suffer? I'm floored! And what's with treating his "family" like that? Sooo need chapter 3!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!