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i dont get it..

THIS IS NOT A NEW CHAPTER WHERE THE HELL IS THE NEW CHAPTER!!!


*puppy dog eyes*


Are you ever going to update this, hon??

Come on, all you have is a bunch of dialog in CAPS. And the stupid shit with ginny and lucious is just moronic. You could have made this way better.

Oh~~~~ an ememy is nearby and that is Ginny! Ron will be sad, so do the twins...will someone notice that sooner than later?

BTW, if Lucius gets a hand on Ginny, will he use that to capture Harry than Draco? Or both Harry and Draco? And will you explain what kinds of 'treatment' have been done to Draco?

As there are too many questions unanswered, you must write it on! XD

hmmm i'm not sure if wut i'm feeling is confusion... anyway i'll state my comments in points.
1st plz fix the bold n underline, cuz whole chapter has that format @_@ not quite easy on the eyes.
2nd well i guess Harry finally fixed up Draco. but "whoa!" at the rape! i thought they'd reconcile or somthin similar, not suddenly go into DomSub relationship. n i thought Harry would top. o__o
3rd well is Lucius bad? like totally? or maybe just prefer to be on the powerful ie winnign side? (i never liked Ginny, so i'm just gona ignore that part LOL)
4th my meaning of "content" isn't really sub stories... i just feel that there might be a bit lack of narration cuz the events are really jumping from one to another. it definitely helps with having the place/time stated, i like to have them to tell me the setting. but i think the story lacks a bit of smoothness.
well of cuz these are just my opinions. maybe it's how i like to read. anyway, i look forward to seeing Harry n Draco together with a hopefully nicer attitude towards each other.
oh n of cuz i like the twins, but their drunken singing seems pointless to me.

I love it, please post soon. The LM/GW was something I wouldn't have expected.

loved the story wright more!!!!!!!!!!!

You must add "rape" in the warning, and maybe change pairing on DM/HP, if it's going be dom!Draco. I was worried for Draco before this chapter, but now I so hate him and want to strangle this bastard, my hands tremble. Harry, being named "pet" after rape makes me cringe. I think, I'm going to be sick.
I hope you will not make Harry enjoy this, because it will be sick for his side also. :(
I absolutely murdered by last chapter, and don't think I can stand to read more...
Unless Harry gets the revenge. Make it better?

Sooo need chapter 4! What happens now? Draco just raped Harry.

More Soon, can't wait.