rate_review Reviews

Yep, just as I thought...the second part was as HOT as the first part. YUM!

I'm going to borrow a term from one of my favorite stories here;

Zaebis! (holy phuck in russian) from Double-edged Sword by Romaine....I think that says it all! KUDOS to a well written chapter...I'm not even ashamed to say that ...yeah...you did a great job of soaking some knickers out here in fandom readery tonight!

Okay, because I love YOU SO much, I am going to say this: WOAH, major sexage coverage
in the Harry does Draco department, and? I likey!!! ;) I am hot and sweaty and need a long shower...
That was...Hott. In fact? I honestly cannot say which scene was hotter! lol
You go on wit yer bad writer self... word.
So, um, now to the part that is hard for me to write...
I um chickened out in reading the what happened to Draco part, AFTER the hott hottt male/male lurvin' because, well, you have already described it to the point it seemed very real already in the Snape Chapter, and um, while I will read it, just can't, not right now.
Still love ya baby, okay!?
Please, don't be mad because I am too scared to read it just yet. I will hold my breath to some now time d/h h/d lovin' complete with a tidy divorces from Pans and Ginny, marriage and a new family for our guys and their kids, oh and a public execution magical style for Blaise, Snape and Narcissa!
WOOT!
Rock on, Rock on!
Ya done good kid.
EG

OOOH! TY! TY! YEA!! An Easter Egg prezzie, Draco/Harry sized! YUM!
lol
I cracked up from your last Chapter reaction to my *innocently placed* cough cough, pun in my review, heh. :)

Oh and now?!
I wanted to wait until all the hoopah was over with earlier today, so that I could take my sweet time and savour
THIS Chapter like a fine wine and large creamy chocolate, mmmm.
I will be back... ;)
EG

I'm shocked and hurt that you would even HAVE to ask!
OF course I want the bloody picture!!! grrr's
Gimmie! Gimmie!
EG
who is now going back to reading this savorous,...story.

I ask you, does Hagrid love furry woodland creatures?!!

*rolls eyes*
OF couse we BLOODY want the bonus features AND sex! We need sex, LOTS of Harry Draco sex in them too!
EG,
who is now gently easing back into the awaiting story...snorts, un BEE leavible! to even suggest that we didn't want it!? Humpth!
;)

YOU ARE FUCKING INCREDIBLE! THAT WAS woah, HOT STUFF!
EEEE! I am eagerly awaiting round two!
When Harry does Draco! lol
YES! D/H sex! WOOT! ;)
Oh my, I feel like I could sleep for hours and I am suddenly parched...
Very well written, you do very nice, erm, HOT sex scenes, just like I like em too! VERY descriptive!
Ya done good kid.
EG

Hum...since I don't want anymore 'quick' review, so I have waited when I have my own long free time - sorry for a little bit late review.

After reading your explanation, Snape's actions did make more sense - actually after reading many fanfictions, I found a little bit more interests in him...but so little is exposed by JK. We did know that he can be a bastard, he is a highly accomplished Occlument (?), and he was very protective of Draco (especially he helped him a lot in Hogwarts + taking the unbreakable vow), so your ideas got a huge point.

So...maybe I can only say Snape is really a sadist - he cannot love and be loved, he can't trust others wholeheartedly, he has no friends to turn to...though he may have Lucius and Narcissa, but those two were more like a threat than friends. He had made mistakes of taking Dark Mark, even he turned for the good, he was in the shadow, with only Dumbledore trusted in him (even Minerva said something against him for several times)...he really is a nobody. That's why when Draco turned out, I would say he was given a chance, and where all your protectiveness came from. I totally agreed that Draco asked nothing from Snape (apart from mistreating Harry and marks), so Draco deserved no such punishment from him.

But now we knew everything, if such truth is reviewed, how would Draco and Harry act? Would there be something like conversation scene between the three? Would others be included in the second episode to help him 'think'? Actually I don't care much between Blaise, Pansy and Narcissa, but I do want to read more interaction/discussion between Harry, Draco and Snape. Snape...deserves a chance to explain all his actions (as his motive is such strong), and that may help Draco rebuild his confidence/trust.

However, when the chasing is moved to England - there is a great problem of magic interference! If you would like to keep this like WOaT, magic and potions and fame of Harry will pose a great hindrance...so would Hermione, Ron, Remus, Minerva and the Ministry appear?

Lastly, please give me the second half of the night out asap...though personally I like Draco topping more, but I also very agree with the idea of equal roles!!! BTW, where is our cute little Parker?

Well I suppose i should feel honored hahaha THAT WAS HOOOOOOT! OMG Yeah that was totally hot! DAMN! *fans self* I think I may have to go pounce the hubby in a bit...again...LOL Anyway, yeah that was HOT as hell. I have no coherant thoughts, I just woke up and I am so ready to get back to sleep. LOL BUT YEA THAT WAS HOT!

Ok you know you gotta send me that photo! LOL I wanna see it! lol I love it, I can't wait to see Harry take charge again. Don't ask my why but I am very into them as switches. Either can be dominant or submissive depending on their mood. I am really into that...

Took a side trip to youtube, and you're right...the song is awesome!
WHEW! sexy shirt-ripping (always wanted to do that), stimulating dirty talk, romantic setting with two over-sexed, sweaty, aroused seventeen year olds...Could it get any better than this?

I'm with you, I have no problemo, visualizing the entire scene in my fevered brain...HOT HOT HOT. Hurry with part duex, I don't want to lose the momentum. Oh well, I'll probably re-read this part anyway, take your time. (not really)

Hell yes, I want a copy of that picture!