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Okay, Parker is suffered from great distress and serious damages, though I hate to know, but I MUST know what has happened to him so as to decide what kind of punishment should be assigned to Narcissa, Snape, Blaise as well as Pansy!! You know, better to make it enough announce - so a divorce can be made between Draco and Pansy!! BTW, please don't tell me that there are more bad guys assist in the act - you know Martin has practically left Draco and Parker alone...

For poor Parker, would he be awoke soon? Just don't know why, it seems to me that he is being put into coma...just hope if he wakes up from his long sleep, he would practically forget everything. And Draco...better to obliviate him asap!!!

Now Draco and Harry's relationship is out, and it seems getting well - as gay is more widely acceptable in US than Britain - just hope there is a bright future for them. For Sam and Elena - in order to stop them and calm Jack, Harry better to go grab his wand and apparate - as they know nothing about magic, again, would aurors be involved?

Lastly, thanks for your email...I will keep it 'safe'....

Well...first of all, thanks for the email, I really will make the best use of it, once I have loads of free time (esp. starting from June!)...

I just forgot to ask - if Harry got so freak out of why Sam and Elena must not go to England, and being so opposed Jack's idea, being a trained FBI agent, logic and reasoning are the basics - how can Harry explain that to muggle? If Harry argued with armed/connections, actually agents are trained for that - but for magic and other stuff, esp. with Snape, who is so fluent with legilimen...that would really be dangerous - so when stopping their set actions, maybe really this time we need help from the ministry as well as England's connection, e.g. Ron and Hermione.

BTW, would Ginny reappear in the coming episode?

haha, you're begining to worry me with your sims addiction
lol
Great Chapter as usual, brought tears to my eyes, poor Parker.
I hope he doesn't remember, and oh my GOD! Who is the *person asking for HP?
Hmm, ya got my poor little brain a frying, lol
Oh well, it keeps my mind off of my own stupid problems.
You know the ones. :(
I am happy that you've updated and so quickly too.
And this was such an excelent Chapter, filled with angsty-goodness.
Ty,
EG

Poor Parker! *cries* That is so not right. :( *sniffles* I can't wait to read more...and for the Sims 2, I am hopelessly addicted to that game, LOL I like to get the crazy flesh skins that make them look like fairy's and stuff. I need to get the game going again and start myself a Draco/Harry relationship that would be lots of fun :P

Well...the team finally made out about everything, and it is okay for Jack doing all the stuff - as he is a senior and the leader, usually his training and experiences are the best, it is logical for him to put all hints in one line. But I do agree to the idea of luring Snape and Blaise over - to get proper 'treatment'...

Blaise should be quite easy - just ask Pansy phoned her on something about being questioned, held and threatened, then Blaise would come over directly...but for Snape, he is experienced (as being a spy) and evil...in order to trick him, better to give him an impression that there is still a chance to get revenge on Draco & Harry. E.g. Parker is still on the lose end...

For Sims 2, even I would like to play, however, this must postpone until all the markings are done! But I would love to have that specific website for future reference! Wow...I can have Harry for my own, and I can realize my fantasy!!!

BALLZ!!! HI!
Well, now this is getting interesting, and I loved the intro of the last chapter,
lol wanted to turn up the tele!
I also loved how in this Chapter you're rounding up the suspects and getting
people in place and things in motion.
Oh just LET that arsehole Snape make a move...I just dare him to!

The sims thingy was a hoot, as you know, I truly have no clue, but, if you like it,
more power to you although, the sex thingy with the toys and all sounds delightfully evil.
Love and eagerly awaiting more sla, er angst, lol
EG

I am excited about this chapter! Wow, I am so glad someone else knows about England and tehir extradition laws, I started to think I was the only one at times :P It's so cool when you see someone use their knowledge!!! I know that sounds dorky but I am surrounded by stupid most of the time so I enjoy it so much more when I see someone with a bit of intellect! Sans my husband I would a lonely bird...the people in Salisbury are ridiculously dull and dimwitted. :/ I have a few friends that I muse with but damn most of them are thicker than day old gravy.

Don't you think that at some point Jack is gonna have to be clued in to the fact that there is a whole other world containing magic? And that includes all of his suspects and perpetrators???
Still, a very good update...I'm interested to see how the team manages to "lure" Snape & Zabini to the US. And I know in my gut, Pansy is in this up to her neck. I think she figured that Draco would get killed in the process of locating & rescuing Parker, that way she would be free & clear with the Malfoy fortune intact. Nothing beats a conniving woman...men just don't hold a candle when it comes to revenge plots. *snickers*

*smile* Sooo need chapter 22! Must have more! How is Parker and Draco? Has Harry checked up on the twins?

Did I miss something? or why is no one on the team concerned that Harry and Draco entered an elevator together, did not appear to get off yet showed up near the Coast Guard boat almost instantly with no apparent means of transportation?