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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well stap me vitals! This is shaping up surprisingly well for X-over (which is hard to do well...I've only attempted one.) Aside from good editing, it also has just enough exposition to avoid boring a reader, but fill me in on the background details. I note that not all the details are clear yet, and I suspect that more will peel away and become obvious as we go! I'll be popping by again shortly for chappie 2! :-) Peace, Sam
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't surprise me in the least that Zabini & Narcissa have been corresponding or that Lucius is alive somewhere. the whole thing smells of DE tactics or maybe even the British Ministry? that's enough guesses for now...I need more info. I too, love "watching this in my head, crazy huh? Certainly am enjoying this, look forward to more.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well! The plot thickens quickly, then removes to simmer :-) Harry is in dutch for knowing Draco at all, Draco obviously has an enemy afoot, and they could be close to him or far away, and Pansy appears to be hitting the roof. That should complicate things nicely :-) Enjoyable...very enjoyable! Peaces, Sam
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the pace and direction you're going in this story, and I must admit that this has been the very first fic I can remember that I've had dreams about!
I'm not too familiar with the characters and the style of the show you're basing this on, having only seen one episode. Despite that, you've given the characters a lot of depth and I'm really looking forward to reading more!
I'm not too familiar with the characters and the style of the show you're basing this on, having only seen one episode. Despite that, you've given the characters a lot of depth and I'm really looking forward to reading more!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely magical! I really, really love this!!!!!!!!!!!! The mystery is so thick, I'm entranced. Please make it last, I want to read more and more. Holy shit, this is so good!! Draco is perfect, Harry is fantastic! Pansy is the psycho, over-reacting bitch I knew she'd be! I'm so in love with this and cannot wait for more!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story line.. please continue.. cannot wait for the next chapter!!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!!! so freaking good. im absolutely addicted (damned! im hooked on too many fics. how the hell am i ever going to get owrk done?). cant wait for more,cheers!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, your killing me here! I don't have a theory on what's going on or who took Parker but when I do come up with my crazy, off the wall theory (which mine always are) I'll be sure to let you know! lol
I didn't expect Draco and Harry to be "former lovers" or whatever so that was kind of a shocker (in a good way ;D )
Thanks for the amazing chapter, I'm already becoming addicted to this story!
I didn't expect Draco and Harry to be "former lovers" or whatever so that was kind of a shocker (in a good way ;D )
Thanks for the amazing chapter, I'm already becoming addicted to this story!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! I LOVE Without a Trace! I adore Danny. Enrique Murciano is so effin hot! Okay sorry lol. But seriously, this looks like it's going to be one of my new fav. stories. You set it up perfectly and it is very well written. Poor Parker, well poor Draco too. But not to worry, Harry can find him! :D I can't wait for an update!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've never watched the tv show before, but this looks really interesting! Can't wait to read more!