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Finally find some time out of work to read...wow - now we know Snape is not a spy and he is intended on catching Harry for his 'work', and Blaise really did join in the kidnap (or how will Cissa know about it...though Pansy maybe too thoughtless to tell her also)...

Actually personally I hate the idea of molesting child with only 3 years old, so now may I ask you a favour - nothing permanent and taunting will happen to cute little Parker? Actually I believe Cissa can do anything to Parker, as she is a death eater and intend on revenging on Draco, but that would really be heart-breaking on knowing awful/horrible thing and death of the boy...would there be some conscience in Cissa's heart?

Okay, back to review, I would love to know whether Snape will appear sooner and later? Would there be revenge on Harry from Cissa and Snape? On him or the girls? As Ginny and the twins are getting to the headquarter, will they be safe? I would guess Draco will live in the headquarter/nearby with Harry (okay - also with Ginny and the girls), would Harry comfort Draco? And actually what has happened between them? Oh~~~~ would Ginny say something rude to Draco?

BTW, will Pansy repay Blaise on kidnapping her son (as I believe she is a mother and really love Parker)? And would the American and British wizarding world involve in it? And...the team - how would they 'manhandle' Harry? Would Harry be kicked off? OH~~~~ there are so many unanswered questions, so please review soon!!!

Never seen WoaT before, but then I rarely watch TV anymore...just select movies and anime, and a lot of news via the computer. I have been catching as many episodes of 'Heroes' as I can tho. I have a great fondness for science fiction :-) I really like this quick paced fic, and thanks for the lovely rec in the A/notes :-) More power to you, and three cheers for Ireland! My family may be 150 years American, but we're from such a rural area in the North of Michigan that it doesn't count for much...still got a bit of brogue and lilt at family gatherings :-) Peace and Love, Samayel

Oh dear! Draco and Harry's secrets are out in the open, Little Parker is with a complete sociopath, and now we're all waiting on pins and needles! I cannot wait to see how this pans out! Peaces, Samayel

I SPEAK FRENCH!!! I would be more than happy to offer you my services, as I already have! Email me if you want to take me up on that! I just wanted to point this out though : "Mon fils, allez-vous se faire voir chez les grecs. Au revoir!" Direct Traslation: "My boys, do go see the greeks. Good bye!" The expression doesn't carry so well. I would suggest: "Mes fils, allez voir le diable...o

Wow...thanks for a quick update. Actually now I am sated - with the knowing that nothing would seriously happen to cute little Parker is a great relief. Though I am no mother, I am a teacher, so I would be distressed by child / teenage molestation. For permanent - I mean permanent - that things would haunt for a lifetime...though Parker is very small and doesn't understand & remember everything being done to him, but it may take the form of nightmares and depression, and I really don't want to see this happening...Also, with the knowing that Pansy does love her son, this is a great relief, that means more chance is given.

Actually I would love to see more Snape in this series, most of the fics described he is really a good guy, so planning and helping something like this is not common. And Snape is a good character, he can do great evils, so I would love to see more of his coming.

What have I missed...yes...would there be magic involved? And England? Would Draco and Harry contact their old acquintances (esp. Ron and Hermione) in publizing that Cissa has escaped and is harming her own grandson? As Cissa is a witch, it is a reasonable guess that she would use this to escape, so what Jack has ordered maybe fruitless - so how can a muggle excellent FBI team deal with this? Again would American ministry help? But...with publizing escape of Cissa and kidnapping of Parker, this may stir greater obstacles for Draco - as his old enemies may take a part, would this story be so complicated.

So...in distress time 2 people can bring together, that means Harry will not be kicked out...then I must wait and see the confrontations between Harry, Ginny and Draco...with a pair of lovely twins!

Wow!
I am now REALLY REALlllY on the edge of my frickin' seat!

Hmm, who could that text message and email be from?

This story just keeps getting better and better...
And, Ty for your reply to my review. :)
You have an interesting eye. *inner*
And the way you see things really is quite different.
Very refreshing to read I might add.
But, it still feels as if I'm watching it,
NOt merely reading it, and not too many writers can cause me to feel this way.
Btw? trust me, lol, IF you don't have patience,
it's very hard to become a good parent, because
patience is a BIG requirement, and one of those things you have to figure
out for yourself. lol. ;)
Eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

*drums fingers patiently against the keyboard... :)
EG

I read this, and even though I don't watch it regularly, it follows the plot uncannily. I'm impressed! In response to your question about Lush o'the Irish, I don't think I'm going to continue it, but yes, drunken sex was implied. Hang over sex, that might be ackward...but anyhow I love to read your reviews when I post mine, they make me laugh exetremly hard! YOU'VE SEEN EQUUS?! *jealous* I read that fic of yours too, made me giggle just a little bit. But if you're ever in need of a beta, let me know! Until next time, -Draca

This story is just amazing!
And I am SO looking forward to more!
I really like how you wrote it, and I think
you've achieved your goal of making it appear as if
one were 'watching'it, not merely reading it.
When my twins were 3, I had been shopping in a large city
for clothing for them with a good
friend and her own older children.
Your story brought back some memories of that
day and my own two hour hell.
It can take only a moment for a child to simply vanish.
Lucky for me, my little girl was found playing hide and go seek by
a decent man and a good natured security guard.
Her big sister had put her up to it, sneaking away to play underneath
the clothing trees.
I was so happy to of found her, that I didn't punish them.
When they were 7, we went to NY NY.
I have been to the toy store in your story.
It is freakin' unbelievably HUGE!
I can only imagine my stark fear IF my daughter had disappeared from there instead.
I know you've written us fans a fictional story, but?
It has enough of a tinge or two of real life insistances to make it very
on- the- edge- of- your- seat and heart- in- your- throat believable.
You've captured my attention and I am eagerly awaiting more! :)
a new fan,
EG

Okay, so the kidnappers know where Harry is too, hmmm...could Ginny be in cahoots with Zabini??? bears thinking about. I'd like to read the flashback of either Harry's or Draco's POV of their Lover days...at least one intense interlude, please? pretty please? with sugar on top? I know I'm a perv, so sue me.

I love this story. Please update more. I really want to read more.