rate_review Reviews

Yet another amazing chapter! Don't worry, I plan on reading to find out! I'm hooked! :)

I am one of these people that imagines the story as I am reading it and envisions everything that is happening. So when I was reading your fic, it felt like I was there with the characters and feeling everything that they were feeling. This only usually happens in a well written story, and your's is DEFINITELY one of them!!

Even though I have no idea what Without a Trace was before I saw the summary for your fic, I have enjoyed every second of this story, and by gods I cannot wait to see what happens next!!

You have written the characters brilliantly, and I believe that the reactions of Harry and Draco (as well as Pansy to a degree - stupid whore that she is, never liked her...) were great! Extremely believable, especially for Draco, who loves his son more than anything, and Harry who just wants to make sure that his baby girls are okay. (Actually, I am so glad that you've written Ginny the way that you have, as I HATE her with a firey passion, as a good slasher that I am, I believe that Harry and Draco belong together!!)

Wow, so enough of the rant, I just want to read more of the fic!

Love Star

PS, If you are sending out emails to people letting them know when the fic is updated, can I please be put on the list? My email is starrobinson55@gmail.com.

Thank you!!!

Well. chapter 4 was chilling & terrifying, I can't imagine even a grandparent doing what Narcissa has done. Kidnapping, maybe, but turning a child over to a known pedophile...turns my stomach. twisted.

Oh Severus you are in for it now...harry is gonna rip you a new one...I imagine he'll come back to England to make sure you get yours. And Blaise, you're dead meat.

Now, a question for you dear author...Harry is still capable of magic, isn't he? at a greater or lesser degree after his final duel with Voldie...are you telling or will it be a surprise?

YAY! You're very welcome and if you ever need more let me know! I actually speak "Canadian" French as opposed to "French" French. I think this key board is broken...damn cheap school computers, but anyhow, this chapter was a bit trippy, although I liked it! lol, need more! Update soon?

Ok my turn to leave a long message, LOL

First off, I love the wonderful FBI stories...they make life worth living sometimes. That cruel build up to the end as you wait on the person to be found. And not to mention Anothony LaPaglia is just too hot for words. hehehe

OK DAMMIT, I WNA TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AND SOON! I must say I like this take on a story and how Draco and harry both have to speak in codes. And damn if I don't want to know what happened between them. Obviously they had a short lived affair but I need more INFO!!!

It is wild to see Pansy a raving lunatic amongst the americans...very funny indded. But yeah, I want to know about their past and poor Ginny, dealing with Harry's lack of affection. Damn boy is too gay for words and then he goes and knocks her up. What is up with that!? I can't wait for more!!!!!!

Aww, don't even THINK it!
This is wow, what a mind blowing experience!
I am STILL on the edge of my seat!
You are a fantastic writer! Totally WICKED.
I bet you'd make a kick ass screen play.

I was so excited to see that you had posted
yet another chapter in this fast-paced story.

I am ashamed to say so, but this is the first
story of yours I have ever read.
I really enjoy your writing style.

I eagerly await the next installment, and I am wondering just
how you are going to slip in a d/h relationship.?
As well as what is going to happen next!
I got chills from this chapter, as everything you
showed us, could really happen as people like spaulding are
really real, and terribily frightening too.
The show's getting EVEN better! lol.
EG

Okay, that was very startling. I had to go and check on my son after reading this! I have the prettiest little blue-eyed toddler in the whole world (to me, anyways) and it freaked me out. Now, on to the review.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. You really put some work into this, didn't you? My god. The fine detail you have mapped out takes me to this place, sitting behind everyone, watching this awful video. I could feel the reactions of Draco and Harry (I sort of missed out on Pansy's, she's a blur) but my heart sank when Narcissa so coldly denied her son and said she was ending the bloodline with Lucius. How could anyone be so heartless and cold? I hate her, I want her dead. I can't wait to see what happens next!

OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter. I feel so bad for Draco and Harry, tears in my eyes and everything. Looking foward to the rest of the story.

I'm not familiar with the TV show, but I love this story. Do we find out how Narcissa escaped from Azkaban?

Oh my goodness, I almost cried!

What Draco must being going through is just unimaginable.

Yeah, I know...I get way to in to stories lol. But child molestation really gets to me (well I assume it gets to most people).

But Parker is going to be okay, right??? Right??? ::sob::

When he said "Byebye Daddy, I love you" (or something like that, sorry if I quoted you wrong) I almost lost it, I could picture a cute little blonde three year old blowing a kiss in my head which just made it 948568948 times worse.

Gah! But I still adore this story! You