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What the heck is Ginny's problem? Mean little bitch. I

Again, thanks for your detailed answers, why I am so insistent with magic...coz if magic is allowed, all would be solved in a matter of minutes! However, if no magic is assumed, this would be a fiction of brain and chase, which is more thrilling! Without magic, Cissa, Pansy and Draco can do nothing (sure, not counting wandless magic)...that only leaves Harry and Ginny, but I would really doubt would Ginny use it, as this Ginny is really un-Gryffindorish...

If I remembered correctly, Snape is the bastard that introduced Graham to Cissa - so really Snape can be a great evil, so...use him well...I would be looking forward to it...for Parker, I know, but this is predictable (as there are really bastards like Graham walking among us). With your oath of nothing that Draco and Harry can't handle in my mind, I have set a deadline...just hoping that deadline would never be crossed.

So back to guessing...now Draco confronted Harry with sudden leaving, this maybe another starting pointing for them - actually being Draco and a Malfoy, with Harry along, he can find strength again (as I do agree with fanfiction setting of getting someone back with ten thousands repayment, as no one takes anything away from a Malfoy). I hope his brain would start working again, you know, Slytherin is cunning and manipulative with huge mischevious ideas...his skills can put to good use, and he has little morals to act and punish...

Now...why still Danny and Elanor (?) have not figured out where would they be next? It is so obvious - the Central Park? Or somewhere they can watch the firework easily? Would the twins help the team to figure out, like, asking favour for firework display / drawing pictures with firework display? Would there be more scenes between Draco and the twins, as that is really lovely...how does Pansy doing? And...would Harry be kicked out the hunt? As the threat is still there....there are still many unanswered questions, hope you can update soon!

I demand an update...umm, Please!
Love this fiction. ^_^

Ballz,
I am, truly, wow* speechless...*
*gulps* dries eyes...
That, was, the most moving,
tear-jerking, amazing...
I can't even think straight,
let alone um, review in complete
sentences, and once again, you've
left me speechless, and shocked, and
SO on the edge of my disbelief.
The way you opened the *scene*
and then the blast of personal emotions
felt by the first FBI agent, and then, as you honed
his sharp observation skills at Spauldings house,
I was biting my nails thinking about that poor baby Parker,
the blood stained little, ohh so sad!
And what his terrified little mind must be going through.
and then things twisted again, and *nice intro of yourself btw, ;)
But it was really seeing the Potter twins through Draco's eyes,
and I was toast. Soggy, wet, boneless, wheepy toast.
OH. MY. GOD. Tears were JUST streaming when they crawled up into Draco's lap,
but, when Harry saw that, more water works.
I am eagerly looking forward to more.
What is WRONG with me?
That's IT, I have a problem,
I know I am NOT alone in this, I EG am an angst whore. lol
All kidding aside Luv,
KICK ARSED CHAPTER, just when I think, no WAY can she out DO
the last one? lol
YOU bloody well do!
Looking eagerly for the *next* HINT HINT*** ~episode! :)
OH wow, is this getting good!
EG

Just think of some new ideas...I am no American, just would love to know whether are there any trains leaving New York? Should we block them also? Also as Cissa can put up a glamour on Parker (you know...just saying leave for a while and dyeing hair of Parker to aviod catching notice), so even postering face and characteristics of Parker may be of no use, so how can the team trace the 3 back? Thus...would the team be notified with magic, or help being given from the ministry? Would there be any tracking spell used? Even Parker hasn't shown any magical ability, as both Draco and Pansy are from pureblood, sure Parker is no squib...so tracking spell should work...or has Draco placed any tracking spell on something wore by Parker? Has Cissa obliviate anybody? Or to be exact...does Cissa possess a wand after escaping from Azkaban?

YAY! YOU UPDATED!!! I really like this story...it's so clffhanger - y. And I heart law/crime scene drama waaaaaaaay too much! I love how the girls are already bonding to Draco. *foreshadowing* Update again soon??? *pouts* Si vos pla

An extremely interesting read.
I love forensic police dramas.
Original plot and very well thought out.
Thank you.
DF

OMG...lol...that was a cliffie...I am sure I am feeling much like you were with me at the end of my last chapter for "For the best" LOL Yes, I wanna know why Harry left, I want the gritty details of him and Draco have their one night of passion and how the hell he ended up with Pansy...hrm...yeah I wanna see Spaulding get his ass killed or something...how does Harry fair with Magic use in America? Has he 'disowned' it? COME ON, give me more!!!!!! LOL

It's rare that I get into stories like this, but I have been finding some excellent ones lately. AU's haven't been on the top of my list, but I coudn't ignore it when you have been so sweet reading my story, LOL. *sighs* I await the next installment patiently.

*erie music, spooky voice*
You will look into my eyes and spill the future plot twists..* lol

No really, wow balls, stellar chapter as per expected, dude, you
have totally rocked my socks with this story! I am NOT worthy... <3

Holey moley! I am still on the edge of my seat, in fact, my arse hurts! ;)

My heart is still pounding, whew, reading what you've written
is like a scenic aerobic workout for my mind! lol.

In between updating my own stuff, lol I have been anxiously awaiting
this story's update and wow, I feel SO ashamed, lol
coz whewww do YOU update FAST!

Yeah, I am gonna have to go and check out yer other stories now,
just to get my fix!^^
If I had one complaint about you as an author, it would be this,

"You give nipple twisting, breath stealing cliffies and daHM,
you need to make your chapters LONGER! Give us more sweat time, lol."
Other than that, Rock on Rock on...
EG

Oh no, it's all right! I'm one of thse people get jumpy at anything. I can write smut until my ears bleed but can't sit and watch a horror movie without my hands over my eyes.

I'm loving how the detectives don't delve too deeply into their cults! Can you imagine Harry and Draco trying to explain that mess? and lol now I know why I couldnt' remember Pansy's reaction. I loved it here though. Dirty, naughty Pansy, having an affair. *tisk tisk*

I am on the edge of my seat here, waiting for more. Please do not take too long to post the next part! AHHH!