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haha, Harry called Pansy a Slytherin slut! Very good chapter, want to see another!

I think you worry too much sometimes...I love how this story is going...I loved the drama of Draco almost being shot...One thing that may need an explaination tho, Danny at the very least should be wondering how HJ and Hermione got into the bathroom...Martin would probly wonder too but he might not have enough information at this point to come to that point...But Danny and Ash knew Parker was alone in that bathroom and unless there is another door from the other side, I'd be suspious(i can't spell that word)...But then maybe you're leading up to HJ and Hermione and possibly Draco telling Jack and the crew about their magic!?!?! hint hint lol...Anyways, great chapter, the story is moving nicely, and we're getting lots of info which is making it so nice to read...Can't wait for the next chapter...

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Sorry...I am out of town for 2 days (taking my students to a Geography fieldstudy camping)...luckily, the facility has internet connection and I have some free time as there are tutors helping around...but definitely will be back on Wed (at HK's time)

It is good to find out that it is Blaise that held Draco's hostage, but not Narcissa or Pansy, as both are wandless and have too less magic around. So now we understood it is Blaise that stunned a nurse, stolen a nurse outfit, lured Draco and imperied him, and used Pansy as a sidetrack...this is a more logical way of going...But still British are British, Slytherins are Slytherins, they are too proud to be in control, as Narcissa just checked around Draco and ordered him to be quick...however, there is a catch - how can Narcissa asked for Parker, first using Mr. Malfoy, but later using Draco? If I were Ash/Danny, I would find that out, and immediate know something was wrong (how can a blond nurse call Draco instead of Mr. Malfoy)...luckily, Ash has already recognized Narcissa from earlier and told Harry...really good response!

Now we had Pansy, Narcissa and Blaise on hands, with Hermione helping and Harry going...but it would really be much better if just Harry keeps and uses Blaise's wand, better to cast more harmful but useful hexes at the three...e.g. jelly-legs, something like bat-bogged eye or others...after they are all secured, informed Jack and held custody, Hermione can come in. Or...would Harry just go back and check Draco, give him Blaise's wand, ask him to set wards and others??? Still it is up-to-you to decide and change...

Now the FBI and NYPD know that Draco and Parker are in danger, would the security level set higher? How would the hospital react with a misguided Narcissa running and threatening around? How would it react? Also with such a grand closed-down in hospital, sure the press will know, how would the agents handle that? Could they still cover the truth that Parker is found?

And wouldn't Hermione need to report and ask for help (esp. with Aurors as Narcissa was escaped and suspected help from Blaise)? Would that be included? Would Ron come over? Would Snape find this all out and help?

With all the above, sure the agents really understand the importance and stress of dangers that Harry stressed from earlier, how would they treat the three suspects (no longer the previous measures, would it? The highest standard of custody)? If ever Ash and Danny and Martin recover their senses, would they find out how can Harry come out of thin air? As Martin kindly pointed out that he saw no one coming into ICU before him, and Katie cleared all the people on the other end...

So now...how will this keep on? Who is(are) the next suspect(s)? If Draco and Parker are safe, with Ash, Danny, others, docotrs and NYPD protection...perhaps with a wand...the next perfect item would only be the twins and Harry...and I am really looking forward to confronting Harry and Snape?

Finally - when will Draco back to his former arrogant, cunning and revengful self? Though I know with only 24 hours...or a little bit more, he underwent hell, but Parker needs him...he must be strong and uphold! Draco - please come back SOON! I will also BRB very SOON!

ooh! What a cliffie! Don't shoot Draco!

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! OMG! That was a mean cliffy!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ok ok, I will give you a break, you updated :P hahaha I can't wait to read more!!!!!!! Argh!

@15. great story, very emotional but good. update soon

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Uh oh!! This looks bad for Draco and Parker!

Well...personally such cliff hanger is somewhat...questionable. If Draco cannot summon enough magic to place the ward - the same would be for all the 3 unforgivables. At least I have not read / found out if it is possible to do an unforgivable without a wand (even Voldi and Harry, as strong as they are, need a wand for that. In other fanfics, usually they have other natural powers/creature magic to cast it wandlessly successfully).

So either...Narcissa possesses a wand or there is another way to force Draco. Especially Narcissa has spent so many years in Azkaban, the drain in her magic would be much (though we do not know whether the Dementors are still in place or not, but in a prison without your wand and all the hatry around you, keeping sanity is a good question, keeping powerful magic would just be impossible. Even for Sirius, he stole a wand in order to perform magic in Hogwarts... and it takes him around 11 years to turn into animagus... so whether Narcissa could possess such powerful magic would really be...quite impossible - unless Snape has done something already!)

And for the reason that Narcissa can polyjoice as a nurse - a full explanation must be given soon. As Draco only recognizes her eyes after his name is said, has Narcissa polyjuiced? But I believe...even in a state of drained magic (+ imperio), Draco can fight.

Without a wand pointing at him and for such a short span of time, the curse cannot last long - imperio must be constantly casted in order to have perfect control, so without a wand, such effectiveness would really be...questionable, so now my personal guess is...either Draco can fight off the curse (as it is weak) or Ash and Aoife (maybe even Parker) found out something wrong with Draco...if it is the picture of Harry that brought Draco back - that would just be another lovely encounter...but really...has Narcissa got something from Snape/with her originally? (Again...anything on her body would be confiscated before sending to the cell / recorded, that must be something obtained after her escape...)

But given Draoc's background, would crucio and imperio be constantly casted (by either Lucius or Snape) on him for training? Would that area be considered in this story?

However, since Pansy is not around, even Narcissa got Parker, with Pansy nearby, maybe nothing damaging can happen to him. But now the question is - after his drain of magic, can Draco fight of the curse?

For Danny - actually he is really out of place, but that is reasonable (maybe not acceptable) - his girlfriend is hurt, he just arrived at the hospital and knew nothing detail of what's going on, he just had a desperate but negative talk of Draco with Martin...if he ever wants to marry Ash soon, he should show more than that.

For Harry, where has he gone after talking with Vivian? It is unlikely that he would be that careless to not consider possible thing that Narcissa and Pansy can do to Draco and Parker (esp. after his frantic call not so long ago), so constant mobile call would be possible. However, given the situation of the twins, Harry's logic and action maybe....again questionable.

Lastly for Parker, he is really a smart boy, as he understands the meaning of good boy and bad boy so good (but this maybe the training given by Draco), but I must admit outburst maybe good and reminder of how good he is....is the answer...but Draco must be fit for him to cure!!! So Cunning, dark and revengeful Draco, be right back soon!!!

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!

I'm hoping the three other adults in the room won't let Draco take Parker! Oh I need chapter 27!!!