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Since I haven't seen any episode of without a trace...does 'zero time' mean the time that everything kicks in and chasing/capturing starts? That means...after one more chapter, perhaps 1 hour or more, there will be the ending...so...the firework starts around at 9pm or later (as the hotel room logged is 12:43pm, now with 8 hours missing)...hoping this time we can get back Parker with punishment on Cissa and Graham.

For Pansy, Blaise and Snape, using state-of-the-art technology is a great idea, you know, pureblood wizard and witch like Blaise and Pansy hold no appreciation on muggle device, they sure don't know anything about tracing call, actaully it astonished me that Blaise has a phone in his home, as well as Snape (why does Blaise not firecall Snape instead of using phone? Maybe it would be difficult to get out of bed and get dirty...)...so now we have Snape on our hands, and I am really looking forward to that bonus track on Snape...just wonder, would that be planning part or punishment scene?

I do agree that it is better for Draco now to know nothing happening with regard to Parker, though he still will be shocked, but it is better to have Parker in his arm until revealing...or else he will be closed to break down again, though that gives more chance of having him with the twins/Harry...hum...this is a dilemma...

After your explanation, Ginny does make more sense, still her idea of leaving is not pleasing...coz, in my opinion, mother should be loving, caring yet with standards and rules, so Ginny should be leave though it is really safe in the headquarter. Maybe I have prejudice on Ginny's role as a mother, however, she may get others in more trouble...wishing that she will discover something and help! For Harry...um...let just say I am really looking forward to the second confrontation between Draco and him, and it is good to hear that he is back to agent mode.

Eek! Another gut-wrenching chapter! I'm so nervous for that poor little boy. Draco and Harry sound like they are in disasterous marriages... they should like... make out or something. (hehe I'm bad)

I can't wait for the next chapter, and soon! I'm dying here!

AHH! Curses! You always leave me on the edge of my seat! Loved the chapter!

Agh!! Cliffhanger noooooooo!! >_< !! Keep it up! I love your writing and you're doing a great job! You're doing a very good job with both sets of characters.

I can't believe that you're using Graham Spaulding though!! I still cringe when I see the rerun of those episodes!! >< But it's a good way to use him! Hopefully they actually catch him this time, or kill him, either or.

Oh, and why have they not figured out the whole "fireworks" thing??? It's been repeated again and again!

BTW, how many chapters do you think you'll have?? I know you said you're done with the last chapeter...

Okay now I'm just blabbing!! =P Sorry about that, it's just it really has my attention, and I want to read more of it!!

Update soon!!!

♥Cyn

*SQWWEEEEE* Amazing! Although I'm kinda mad at you for avoiding the question!!! MAKE HIM ANSWER!!!! oh my, yes I have a fondness for CSI: Vegas, but the last season or two has been really weird, so I don't watch it as much as I used to. But yes, feel free to email me phrases and what not. It would be my pleasure to help a fellow author! *bows house elf style* And ranting is good! There wasn't any Draco in this chapter...more??? Elena and Danny sound like me and my best friend Matt, I call him Matty or Mattypoo just to annoy him...but yes...that's all for now... ;)

-Draca

Whey!! You updated!! Yes!! =) very happy about that. Thanks for your long comment to my review, it was awesome!!

Brilliant chapter, and I have to say is: Bloody adverts!! On tv here in Australia, they come thick and fast, and it ticks me off when I get to a good part lol. But, I cannot wait until the next part.

I was all teary-eyed when I "saw" Harry watching the news broadcast about Parker's underwear, I felt so bad for him.

I have a teeny suggestion *grins* I know that we're not going to get any Harry/Draco loving, but can we get a little and oh so natural kiss between them?? I have a little scenario in mind that came to me from a picture I found on a fan-site. I shall email it to you in just a second, and you might be able to see what I mean (the pic has Draco distraught and Harry holding him and kissing him to make it better) it's gorgeous and you might like it.

Ashleigh's pretty groovy. (I like writing me into my fics as well, I think we all like that at some point *grin* especially as a character that sticks in people's minds - I have the tendency to write myself as a male though, which is odd, as I am female *shrugs* oh well)

Anyhow... please please please update soon!! I look forward to receiving that email that tells me that you have updated!!! It makes my day =)

Thanks again for everything!!! ~*Star*~

Gracias por la bien venida!!

Heck yes I know WOaT!! I used to watch that show EVERY Thursday!! But life stuck it's nose in and I stopped watching it! I should though... that and some CSI! Just TV period!! Grr! Damn life!!

Spaulding kills himself?!?!?!? Damnit! I didn't get that far!! That's how long I haven't seen it!! >_< *sigh* I think if he killed himself then that wasn't ver justic-y! He should have suffered a bit before he died >)

OMG! ME TOO!! It made me sooo mad when it was right in their face sometimes about where the person was!! URG!! But then sometimes I was just plain wrooooooooooooong!! Hmm... are you going to pull some twist like that too?! I can see that happening! They're where the fire works are... no wait! They're at the drive-thru that's showing film with fire works in it!! Or something...

Yes, I most deff. like how you write the WOaT characters!! This is the first time I've read a fic with them in it too! Pretty darn good so far!!

Keep it up, and update soon!!

♥Cyn

OMG! I really want them to find the boy soon. I don't even want to think what the blood on the undergarment means. Please update soon. ^_^

Oh my goodness... That poor little baby. I hope they catch that guy and cut his prick off! Grrrr I hate him so much!

The rest was great! I loved Ashleigh (did I spell that right?) !! and lovely ending, I can't wait to see what Harry says, ooh!!!

Wow. Damn, I want the next chapter!! Thanks for the email =)

I am very interested to see how the conversation pans out between Harry and Draco =) I liked Ashleigh as well. She seems to slip into the story nicely, and not just there like some original characters that authors write into their stories. She has a purpose, other than being Danny's girlfriend, and the other characters interact with her like she's been there all along (which, technically, she has, I suppose)

Great work yet again!! I was a bit "Eep" at the Parker piece, but, you've said plenty of times, it's nothing that they can't handle, but I would like to see Harry and Draco's reactions to it. I can certainly picture Draco killing the bastard if he had his wand, and I don't think that he would hesitate to kill his mother either. (If I were him, I wouldn't either, as harsh as that may seem, because I love my mum in real life)

Loving the development, and I am on the edge of my seat each chapter, wanting to know what's going to happen next, and hoping that it's not too bad (and also for a little Harry/Draco loving, which I think A LOT of people are hoping for lol).

Keep posting!!

Love ~*Star*~