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YAYAYAY! I wanted to review this last night, but my interweb died! BLARG! But anyhow, loved it! But still no Draco *pouts*. Tis okay, email me again if you need more help. I did send back a respnse if you didn't get it I'll resend it. Okay, so alleles are DNA markers. Identical teins have identical DNA, but different finger prints....odd. But anyhow, if you have 11 in common, you're a mother/father and 7 is brother/sister me thinks....but yes, that's all for now! *sends cookies*

-Draca

PS I'm glad you enjoyed I Promise You! Your review made me laugh hysterically.

Haha! Harry's going to kick his ass now! WHOO! :bounces up in down in computer chair::

Oh and yes, the emails did make me laugh. Alot. lol

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Hrm...that is where I am...hrm...because I think I must kill you now. COME ON!!!!!! I FINISHED FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SInce you kept reviewing and feeding my poor writers ego, LOL Hell I would even take the bad reviews but damn people are skittish about reviews on here. Bleh.

OK - I want LOTS OF HP?DM SMUT!!!!!! Well I think it's more an expectation after all this build up, hahaha. Yes, I too hate reading stories that aren't complete. BUT DAMMIT...FUCK MAN! Here I get into a story and I have to wait everyday for it like water. Bleh. It's payback...and its a bitch. Poor Parker...Spaulding = VERY BAD AND EVIL MAN AND I WANT HIM DEAD! Narcissa, that bitch can take up the ass from Spaulding...hahaha I don't care about her, she pisses me off in this tale. Snape, him and Blaise better get their due. Please tell me you are going to tell us what happened with them...

HArry and Draco were just too damn cute considering the circumstances...hrm...do they question HJ about his rapid disappearance? I mean you set up the whole camera thing, now you have to follow through. it's not right any other way. HAHAHA Someone has to ask him...I mean so what happens at the end, does Harry go back to London with Draco and they live - squee - Happily Ever After? What happens to Ginny, I mean, yeah lets kill her, kill her til she's dead! HAHAHA The nerve...no understanding in the woman. Pretty Lily and Molly...how adorbale. So you have seriously never read the HP books or seen the movies? (Or did I just read that wrong or what?)

Evvvvvvvvil! hahaha I WANT MORE!

You have a nasty way of ending the chapter when it's getting good. Oh but the suspense is half the fun of it all. I love this fiction. Please update soon to see where they are at, and how Harry knows where they are. ^_^

So finally thoughts kick in and everything sets in line...really looking forward to the climax...BTW, has Draco trained Parker to swim? Just in case?

It is really reasonable for Snape and Blaise to have phones and internet as they really needed to contact with Squalding, as they have planned for half year, that time would train them to be an expert already...but still they knew too little with muggle's technology, though Squalding may know, and is clever enough to get a prepaid untraceable phone...this still expose their weakness...ah...I would hightly recommend worldwide Ministries of Magic to learn about newsest technology!

For reason of Harry leaving England, actually you have given enough hints, but I wonder which event happened first? The announcement of Draco's wedding/engagement with Pansy? Or Harry getting Ginny pregnant and married? As Harry has left for 6 years, and the twins are 5 years old, that only meant...when Ginny was pregnant and known, Harry has already decided to marry her...but did this decision made after the announcement, so Harry added another one of leaving? Now we wait for you to give more hints on the sequence of event...

BTW, I hope when the forensics trying to get Draco's blood, they would have a good excuse and say Draco from another break down...please let my wish come true...

For bouns track, Snape, it is good to have both - you know, portraying him with brilliant plan and evil grin at first (imagining himself of getting revenge), then when Blaise called and every plan went astray...wow...the expression of Snape will be priceless...For Harry/Darco...if the confrontation cannot be made in the climax, it would be great to set in the bonus, and an understanding of the 2...and some after events like Ginny's departure, argument between Blaise and Pansy, meeting between the twins and Parker...and dilemma of whether Harry leaving America and back to England (if the two can make it and would Ron and Hermione appear in it?)...actually I would doubt, when the twins get their letters from Hogwarts, Harry would have no choice but only choose to leave...

For Ginny, I too haven't got any good idea of how she should act...but getting know of her position in Harry's life would definitely be needed. Ginny, like Ron, can do great when necessary, it is only now she feels uncertain, not needed, lonely and helpless that she turns to alchoho...so during the climax, if she happens to be self-loathing, then able to help the team/chase with realization of Harry's love with Draco - she can make it on her own again somehow, maybe with the help from Ashleigh/Elena (?), she would be a Weasley again...

Ginny..pfft...throw her in front of a bus for all I care. Harsh, I know...she is just one character I love to hate...as far as I can tell, she has no redeeming qualities other than being related to a family that Harry once cared for. For the sake of your story, have her get caught in the crossfire somewhere and have Narcissa kill her. wrong place, wrong time...

it seems as though alot of your characters have forgotten their magic...no glamours have been used to disguise, no potions so far (polyjuice, for instance), side-along apparition...

Still it's a very well done story, and I have enjoyed reading. I am really looking forward to future chapters.

Doh, another cliffie, LOL Thanks for the email, its cool...Ok I see what you mean about it being a continuation. LAbels are usually lost to me in regards to the stories most of the time. I usually don't step outside what I know - I mean I take personal liberties with my tales, but I can't help it, LOL. I LOVE this story! ARGH! Damn those commercial breaks. :P

So...lets see, Harry leaves Draco on the edge of his seat as he tries to find out why he left England...hrm...damn Harry. BUT I suppose in this case it was warranted. LOL I will let you by this time. *I'm almost 24 by the way, so no, I would hate for you to die of a heart attack of shock. I will try my best to have the story completed this weekend. I have a job interview Monday morning and if I get it, I will not have nearly as much time to write. BUt I almost don't want the story to end. It's like a lifeline for me in a way. Especially since it's 50 pages + of something I created in my mind...LOL Well, outside of the juicy characters JK has so lovingly placed in a menagerie for us to toy around with.* hehehe

So I can't wait for more, I almost want to say email me when you update, LOL I hate missing chapters.

Ballz,
Holy shit!
That Chapter was AWESOME!
Ty for explaining so much in your Chapter answer/tangent thingy lol. ;)
You have answered most of my questions, and wow, that's a first for
me to have THAT done in SUCH detail by an author.
Usually it's NOT that much explained, so, I think that's really kewl of you to do so.
Also, the tiny clues you've sprinkled all through this Chapter has me STILL on the edge of
my seat. *what if any is the signafiance of the music box? Is something in that room
a portkey just waiting to be activated? Som any questions!

I also like how you've given your story a 'split apple' view too.

If you cut an apple in half from the stem down, it splits, but it's not perfectly.
One side is always gonna be a bit more than the other.
We are seeing the view from so many perspectives, and while
on the other side, we've had a glimpse, there is STILL more to show and share.
I really like how you have even *extras* of this story waiting for us in the wings too.
I loved the fast pace, and I cannot wait for the next *episode!*
Brilliant writing!
EG

Arrrrgh! Tension! Yer killin us here...but at least we're loving the journey! Peaces, Sam