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for Without a Trace

by graballz

schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when the damn thingy on here cuts me off* grr's*
anyhoo, I love it when you say such nice things about my reviews
in your replies. *blushes*
BUT YOU!? You are SUCH an awesome writer, and I mean it, seriously.
I read a lot of stories.
A friggin' lot, but only ONE writer has ever given me SUCH chills and thrills and more than
once, and that's my jameschick. :)
And now, YOU.
I also wanted to say that your imagination is not only awe inspiring, it's such a sight to behold.
The detail that you give to even the most tiniest of things, is mind blowing.
This Chapter like the last was actually 4-D for me.
I could smell the sea air, feel the building tensions, and the effects of the POV's
even Parkers on THIS chapter just blew me away!
In a few paragraphs you told us SO much! TY!
I <3 you and tip my writing quill to you too. :)
You RAWK MY SOCKS!
Eagerly awaiting the next part... ;)While thanking you for writng this part...
It's raining orange peels... lol
EG
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't consider that a cliffie. I can live with it. And I know that you said you've been certified for CPR and looked it up on Wikipedia. But I've been certified twice in the last 2 yrs due to my job, and I'm pretty sure it's 15 chest compressions for every 2 rescue breaths... I read 30. I'm just saying...
person misslala
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I will give you a break this time, you have killed the fucked up bastard. YAY! Can't wait to see the H/D STUFFFF!!!! hehee ok I reserve my comments for now, LOL I just can't wait to see what happens.
person Sakya
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. You are worse the all that advertizing on TV! At least with them I know it will be only five minutes of torture. This is inhuman!!!!

I'm almost killing myself here. What happens next? Where is Draco? Did he get Parker? What will happen to Ginny?
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! The baby!!! His hands and feet are taped together! And the water is sooo cold! I've gotta have chapter 11!
person Danine
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! That was a very nasty thing. That poor child. I really hope they wipe his memory of this nightmare and no one speaks of it again. And that sick fuck rubbed on my Harry... I suppose if you're going to die though... that would be something to die for. And what of Draco and Parker?? I hope they're okay. They need to catch a damn break here!

Awaiting the last chapter please!!! I hate knowing this is ending must I must have it!
person Star55
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is the ONLY fic that I have left so many reviews for. You know why? BECAUSE ITS SOOO BLOODY DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahem, now. WHAT A CHAPTER!!! wow. *cries* poor poor parker. I am sooooo glad that that "motherfucker" is dead. He was too horrible for words!!

I hope that both Draco and Parker come out of the water okay (well, I am guessing that they do, as you say what happens to Parker is nothing that they can't handle, and I am PRETTY sure that they couldn't handle is death - plus, you promised hot man/man sex and if one or both is dead, then that CERTAINLY can't happen)

Wow, that was an awesome chapter!! I can't wait for the next installment!!

Please oh please update soon!!

*gives 100 boxes of cookies to keep you going for the hottness you promised and a Harry/Draco plushie for inspiration* (although I am sure you won't need it, but we all need a Harry/Draco plushie to love lol)

You are a literary goddess *bows*

~*Star*~
person NightLo
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally have some time for more detail review...

I am just wondering what would happen when Draco emerged with Parker...surely there will be a warm moment of hugging and crying and comforting between father and son...perhaps if you are 'considerate', we can also experience a nice moment between Draco and Harry...then after...sure would be FBI stuff, e.g. checking damage on Parker (hopefully if possible, please have Harry cured Parker before announcing to Draco, but I knew this is impossible, as long as Draco read the news or Parker told his nightmares to Draco)....so romance stuff has to be waited for long long time, as Harry needs to report and write a report and explain disapperance in a lift etc...so you see, this is what movies, shows and books told, and your hints are clear enough, so we can get a good guess. Let you know...I actually cannot predict what will happen with 'blind beauty' also, up until now do I understand why the title is blind beauty - and the beast.

Well...it is really hard to 'see' why Harry would leave with Draco, sure Ginny and Harry will get an understanding or a divorce or something, as Harry so is used to live as a muggle and as an agent, there is really little for romance development now! As Draco will leave USA as soon as everything settles, most probably Harry will pay one or two visit (with the twins??), then as in WOaT, Harry will be beep away...after a long time, e.g. 6 months / 12, when Parker gets over his fright or Draco feels safe enough to visit again, would there be formal development...I seriously doubt there will be so soon at all.

I would love to read more about Harry and the twins, we need to learn about the girls more!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I LOVE this fic! I don't usually read crossovers, but I've been lacking good fics lately and I saw that you were updating very quickly so I gave it a shot. And I am SO glad that I did! This fic is amazing!!! I've seen WOaT, but I do not watch it regularly... I might start now, though. lol. Parker is adorable. I am so glad that Spaulding is dead. And I an not wait for the next part to see if Harry gets Draco and Parker back safe and sound.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You update pretty quick!! Last time I checked it was at chapter 7!!! Uh... actually what I had said in Spanish was "Thanks for the welcome." But thanks for the show too!! It's been great so far, and you do great cliff hangers by the way!

I don't know if anyone has had a go as to WHY Harry left England... but didn't you say that after he found out that Draco and Pansy were getting married that he had to leave?? I figured he left because of that...

Awe! Finally some Harry/Draco action! Even if it was quick... it was still good!

::does a dance:: Yay! Spauldings dead!! Woot woot!! Although, you just had to go and give him one more perverted rub against Harry didn't you =P But that makes it even better I suppose, that you stick to the characters, and make me cringe just thinking about stuff like that >.<

And...

OMG!! Parker!!! How could you!? The poor thing! What about Draco, did he get Parker? Ginny... haven't heard much about her, what's going on with her???

::sad::

Sounds like this is almost over... now with that sick fuck dead... But that just means that the bonus features are coming up!! ^^;; !!

Can't wait!