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Aww, such a touching chapter! I'm so glad everyone was saved. Poor little Parker, that kid has been through hell. I love the added touch of Harry trying not to look at Draco sexually while he undressed him, too! I'm eagerly awaiting the next!

Oh~~~ thanks for information on the twins, actually I would love to see their interaction with Parker & Draco more...I believe Lily is just like Gryffindor side of Harry, while Molly is just like the little Slytherin side of Harry (where is Ginny? Sorry...I don't know her much)...but...are they really a princess and angel (sure in the eyes of parents, they are)? But we know...little beautiful girls, with cute characters and lovely acts, they actually can be little cute devils, especially after interacting with Draco.

I must ask - what is the New Year Eve 'disaster'? Please be honest, and tell the truth as soon as Draco and Parker are safe! (I am thinking would that night be the day of Draco's wedding announcement, or either something personal between Draco and Harry..., which one would be?)

It is really lucky that Draco remembered to teach little Parker for swimming, and in the incident, Parker is clever, cool and calm enough to stay safe with boats around (maybe he heard Draco's yell and knew that his daddy was coming - but I cannot tell). He will do great! Maybe he can use his charm, cute puggy eyes and little cunning to win Harry's and the twins' hearts!

For Draco, it is really nice that he wanted Harry to be around, and remembered Harry was cold also - and sure he always took advantage, as soon as they were safe, he remembered the unfinished chat with him. With precious Parker on one hand, immediately he remembered to grab Harry with another - surely he is Lord Malfoy. And I strongly suggested to include a short episode in the bouns/later chapter to describe his near death experience - you know, floating/hovering ghost above his own body and 'seeing' how hard Harry was trying to save him...with confession of love - this clearly could be a moment to 'torment' Harry...

I am sure Harry will stay with them until their wake up...just waiting to see what would follow...between Harry, Draco, Parker, the twins and FBI agents/work...but I have a doubt that Harry is really dedicated to his work, though now he has no past to taunt him, would he give up that easily?

Sorry, after re-reading again my curiousness kicks in - but I must ask first - is there anything like warming and drying charms? Since fanfics are too common to have those, I just kind of again wonder Harry's forgetfulness of being a wizard and using magic. Though without any wand in hands, and under state of shock, that would be difficult

*hands out more cookies to share* Glad you liked them!!

Another brilliant chapter. I thought something bad was going to happen to my 2 favourite blondes. *Sniff* so so glad it never!!

You certainly live up to the title!! as if you could ever fail from that title!!

Brilliant work as always =)

Love Star!!

MERDE!
My friggin' internet went out last night and I was gggrrin'
wanting to read this SO damn bad but,
it's working now and so I FINALLY could. ;)
Wow, now that was an impressive chapter considering that you were
pissed' when ya wrote it? For real? wow.
I am impressed!
Even sober i cannot write that well! lol
I am mad at you for yet another
cliffy *biotch lol*
may you swim in orange peels! grrr.
But?
I am happy HAPPY with you thus far for A.) killing off spaulding,
B.) having Draco rescue Parker, and Harry rescue them both.
and C.) wow, I had NO idea about the hpypthermia thingy, the information you
shared might even save a life one day, so good on you!
All in all?
I want MORE! hee*
Cannot wait for the next eppie!
Ya done good kid! Major 4-D AGAIN! I feel COLD!
I <3 you ;)
and SQUEE! Draco kised Harry! YES!
EG

i know i havent reviewed for like 2-3 chapters, but damn this is good. im glad i didnt read each of the climax chapters seperately. i think i wouldve gone crazy for more. im so happy that jack killed spaulding. if i'd been the one to shoot him, i would have stomped on his head and reveled in his blood. i hate him grrrrrrrrr. the whole hypothermia thing had me on edge. made me realise that i should really update my first aid training. and our boys are connecting again. i love this fic. kudos to you for writing something this amazing and making me read a cross-over ^__^

cheers

WOW! You really update quick, last I read was CH:8. But I am happy that I didn't see your updates sooner, because it was worth reading all the climax together then separately. Oh and the whole hypothermia thing-y, OMG! I can't tell you how scare I was that Draco was going to die. Good thing Harry knew what he was doing. Well I hope I see your next update, cause I want to see what's going to happen now that Draco is going to be ok (I hope) and He and Harry are going to be talking about their relationship(I think). So please update soon. ^_^

*screams* no! not my Draco! *jumps on top of him to gove body heat and huggles him* Yes, you would do that to Draco, maybe just in a fiction, but you would do it! I read this last night and had a really long review wrote out and my internet went *KKkKKAAAAAAA BBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!1!!!one!!!!* so that made me mad, but here I am! Oh my, yes a support group wouldn't be needed if you weren't so angsty! lol, but yes, loved this chapter because Parker is okay, and I'm still dancing for the fact that you blew the mother fucker, or I suppose kidfucker away. A while ago you asked if you should kill Ginny, and I origianlly thought, yes, but I was thinking about it and no. She may be an asshole, but she's still the girls' mother. So that would be causing them pain. So, maybe maim her a little bit, but not too much. But yes, feeling ADDish again...wwwwwoooooooooooo! So yes, I'm going to start making Harry and Draco dolls, I think they'll kind of look like Potterpuffs. And they'll be squishy and cuddly. I have to work on the chocolate stain/tearpfoof ness of them though so we can cry on them with our cookies/brownines while reading fanfiction. Oh my, I think that's all for now. *munchs on some snackage from party* and I send cookies and Doritos, because I have a Costco mega bag that I'll never eat all by myself...*munches* update soon!

*loves* Draca

All i have to say is "Wow!!!!!!!" THis is an amazing story, really well-thought and just..wonderful! I never was a huge supporter of Without a Trace, but now i think you may have swayed me to watch it. Do you watch the one that the killings happen in the past, and then the files are brought back out for re-exacmination after some new evidence is found? I can't remmeber what it's called, it's driving me crazy, but it's a pretty sweet show and i bet you could incorporate it into a good HP story!! lol, okay sorry im rambling. This is an awesome story and i cannot waaaaiiittt to read the rest of it!!

Shannon

I sooo need chapter 12! When Draco quit breathing I was sooo scared. I know you said that neither Harry or Draco would die but it still worried me. And then Parker. Oh I hope he's okay! Must have more!