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Soooo need chapter 14 or episode number 2! Whichever way it comes! Gotta know what happens next!

Ballz!!! YOU RAWK MY SOCKS!
KUDOS for: No Cliffy! *does happy feet Snoopy dance*
I LOVED this!
Yes, now bring on the deleted scenes, footnotes,
whatever your little heart desires luv. You write it, I wanna read it! :)
Ohh, and I was swooning, cooing and making you virtual cookies, cakes and steak dinners, lol
ANOTHER EPPIE!!! YIPPIE!!!
*happy dances through the orange peel trails out of the room* ;)
EG

Just finished...however, this is a crossover between HP and WOaT, right? How can tracing Snape and Blaise mix with WOaT? Would not that be other FBI team/ police work, not THIS team? Or do I know insufficient about WOaT??? I am all confused!

Well, personally I suggested you can add one more episode to end all things, e.g. documentation, interrogation, release of news and report etc, that will wrap all better (or in a more FBI way)...instead of opening a new episode, change Snape and Blaise into another bouns scene...sure there MUST be another scene between Harry, the twins, Draco and Parker...

BRB...

Ginny is a bitch... update soon!

Well at least he tried to do the right thing...poor Harry. Poor Ginny too...but at least she could have been honest with Harry. Man...that's harsh. I can't wait to see Harry and Draco go flying back to England together or Draco uprooting to America, LOL Though...harry should leave that job and do something else...something where he can be with all three children and his sexy, tasty new mate, LOL Are you going to go into the bitter dovorce stuff or leave that to the imagination? I mean, its crazy how much you have to attempt to pull from this bad boy, lol

Yay for special features!! (that is the reason I *always* buy the dvd lol)

In a way I feel bad for Ginny, but I can't help but not really care for her. She was stupid to think that Harry could ever get over a sexy god like Draco!! heehee...

Well written, and you still live up to the title!!! Woot =)

Can't wait for more special features, especially that of the Harry/Draco kind!!!

Love Star

Bye Ginny...

Wooo!! Awesome story! I can't wait to see how you turn the second part out!!!!

Alright, 'Cold Case' is definately what i was thinking of!! thank you for clearing that up:P. Great Job. I tottaly know that Pansy (being the bitch she is) knows something!!! even if it is her own son, maybe she really did want to just get rid of him so she would feel no ties to Draco whatsoever. I mean that would be easier (in some sense, the crrrrraaaazzzy one) then just up and leaving your child, getting rid of him so he wasnt a burden on your mind. Keep it up, I love it, part two should be spectacular!

Shannon

Finally have time to read Ginny's extra...really tiring of today work.

Well, I must admit that it took a long time to break someone heart and belief. Being fascinated and infatualated with Harry for MORE than 5 years (as in book one, Ginny squealed when she first saw Harry), especially after the first year incidence (as Ron might tell her) and second year disaster (as she personally involved), Harry's knight image was just too big to be probably disposed of...no wonder Ginny would thrill and only be happy with Harry's attention.

But now we knew it was Harry that avoided, ran and hided...he must be in denial to be in love with Malfoy, or, knowing that Draco was going to engaged and married Pansy, still Draco had the nerve to ask Harry stayed with him, would Harry be so broken and started with Ginny, after finding out the newly formed couple. Though he never expected the pregancy, this just gave Harry a chance to start anew.

Still, some faults were brought by Ginny, had she not invited the Slytherins, of all Draco Malfoy, would their marriage be destroyed so soon...Draco must be very enraged to obtain an invitation, raging that Harry got a nerve to send (or in Draco's POV - order/challenge) one - so this just started another chain reaction...brought Pansy, gave present, wished well and showing off...so in the end, Harry could not bear the news of Draco's wedding, and typically flied all the way high to USA - avoiding possible another Draco's confrontation + wedding challenge...

So now I understood why Draco was so peppered up and taunted in challenging Harry even though in such despair situation...and he must be very very happy to hear Harry's confession...

Harry staying in the hospital room is so sweet. And the Ginny chapter kind of made me feel bad for her, but not enough to want Harry to stay with her... ;P

It's too bad you don't know Law and Order as well as you know WOaT. Because a 'british version' of L&O (probably SVU... ummm... Special Victims Unit) would be a better fit for your 'second episode'. Either way I'm sure it will be wonderful. You have a gift for writing. I've enjoyed this fic emmensely.