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for Without a Trace

by graballz

person Jan
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! When I read what Draco had to go through I almost cry for him. I wish Lucius was still alive so that Harry could give him the hurting he deserve. As for Severus I can't wait to read what Harry's going to do to him. Hope it's very, very and I mean very painful. Both Lucius and Severus deserve to feel what they did to poor Drcao and be torched to a slow gruesome death.

But Oh My! That little sex scene was wonderful. Can't wait for more. Seeing as Ginny left Harry all he has to do is start the Divorce papers. As for Draco....well seeing as everyone thinks that Pansy had something to do in the kidnapping thingy, and that she also had an open relation with Blaise, that should be enough to start the divorce and child custody in Draco's favor.

Well I can't wait to see. So please update soon. ^__^
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I would tell you,
Ive been recommending your story everywhere.
Thanks again for the great read.
person misslala
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ME-FUCKING-OW!!!!! Alright Harry and Draco in the hospital bathroom!!!! HAHAHA That's is so funny. But I must say what a fitting reunion of their souls as it were. MY GOD! Poor Draco - DAMN SNAPE AND LUCIUS! *kills them both many times...or kills them until they are dead* That was a joke from a movie, but I can't remember what movie at the moment. hahaha.

I hope Draco and Harry get to fuck SNAPE UP! Pardon my ghetto terminology there, but damn! What sicks fucks...and the sad part is, that shit happens in real life even if not to that degree, obviously magic out, but you know sick eil fathers try to make their sons "straight" again by teaching them lessons. I dispise hate...bleh.

So I can't wait for more as usual. Mmmm...Hot Harry Draco sex...RAWR!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're back together! I sooo need chapter 16! Can we kill Severus now?
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm that was interesting!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the Draco/Harry deleted scene.
You are amazing!!
Shannon
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
delish as ever, bring on the hot man lurve
AND the next eppisode!!
wink wink* OH! You SO slay meee!
EG
person Jan
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great update as always. Please update soon.
Hmm...I wonder are there going to be any Harry and Draco flashbacks too?
Well can't wait to find out. ^_~
person NightLo
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...get some time now to review at last.

Actually these deleted scenes help us to understand the characters more, especially Jack - I understood the feeling of unfinished business and constant pain in ass, and I love that pain is finally gone! It is more interesting to read when we can finally link the characters' lives with us - how do they feel and what do they think...somethings like that. Really hope to read more about Jack and Vivian as team leaders...

For Draco and Blaise - how can a secret lover being so un-secret? Actually I just wonder under that situation why did Draco not get a divorce with Pansy? Malfoy/pureblood pride? With no mom and dad around, he is Lord Malfoy, cheating will be the ENOUGH reason to have a better and happy life...okay, maybe he is afraid of fighting the custody for Parker...but no one can interfere with a Malfoy's possession and heir, right? Also, if Blaise is 'really' in love with Pansy, not just fancying some married woman who is hot in bed...he should fight...maybe this is the reason why Blaise has participated in the planning....

Wait to read about Harry, DRaco, Molly and Lily as well as Parker, for Snape, well it is really up to you to decide, both bonus scene and new episode sound great to me!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've sooo gotta have chapter 15!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I was up late enough to see this last night, but needed to sleep since my eyes were closing themselves and not opening again. (AKA falling asleep at my computer). HOORAH! More Harry/Draco pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasssssseee!!!!! *jumps up and down with a plate of cookies as bribery*. But yes, feeling slightly ADDish again...WWWWWWWHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I bought 'Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them' and 'Quidditch Throught The Ages' today. I'm thoroughly enjoying them. Especially 'beasts' because it has Harry and Ron's thoughts throughout it. It makes me laugh. Anyhow, yes, that was long and pointless...but yes, MORE PLEASE!!!

*loves* Draca