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for Without a Trace

by graballz

person MoonTart
schedule November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read this. It is as good as I remember. I wish it was complete though. Would really love to find out what happens next.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story you have going on here
on a side note, good idea to not use mr. Rogers seeing as how the guy had a pretty weird life.
that and the reason he always wore sweaters was to hide his sleeve tattoos. HA!
person MoonTart
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can actually "see" this playing out as an episode in my head. Can't wait for the next installment.
person Jan
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that I missed you previous updates. Thankfully I remember the title of this story and looked up. Poor Parker, to have such a crazy grandmother to do such a thing like that to him and to Draco as well, what a bitch. I was so happy to read when Harry slap Pansy. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I have a feeling that at the moment when it happen no one question Harry and Hermione about how they got in to the restroom in the first place seeing that there is no opening from the out side and they never saw them entering the room, do to the commotion but how will Harry or Hermione for that matter explain that little prob. Any ways Please update soon. I still love your story. ^_~
person Anon
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!
Seriously freaking out here.
I stumbled across your story
via a fic rec by Weasley Wench.
This is sooo good.
WOaT happens to be one of my most
favorite shows. I can see the story
playing out and it's awesome.
Thank you so much for writing this.
I need to keep reading this!
person sunset20
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY I have some moments to spare so I can review your story! I really love it, it's so exciting even without knowing the original series. But I must tell you, my fav part was the end of the first (was it the first? never mind...) chapter, when Harry and Draco met. OH SHIT, indeed! :D Asleigh is fantastic, a real angel! Poor Parker!!!! Please help him to get over all this REALLY REALLY soon!!! And please torture Narcissa to death!!!!! BITCH!!!! And give Draco a big hug from me, okay? *winks*
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Poor Parker!!! :( Poor Draco!!! :( *hugs both boys tightly*

I hope that Pansy, Narcissa, Blaise, and Snape get what they deserve for being so horrible and cruel... And I hope that Harry moves back to a magical community and starts using magic again... He deserves to live as himself and not be hiding all of the time.
person misslala
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter!!!!! I am so looking forward to the next installment! I want to see lots of hot juicy Drac/Harry and them living/liking happily ever after!!!! hahaha
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 29! What happens next?
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I see that you have been busy....so sorry I was out of town for a few days, just got home and am catching up on my reading. *snickers* Well done! Now that they have Narcissa & Pansy in custody again...won't the US Federal govt have something to say about them being extradited?? After all, they did kill a US Federal officer. Hermione will be a busy beaver trying to untangle this mess. Can't wait till they get their hands on Snape!