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for On a Hot Summer Night

by RunDesireRun

person virginia
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im loving this. i do wish the chaps were a bit longer though. pls update soon!
person misslala
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh, I should learn my lesson by now, that it is in fact better to save the Story and wait until it is complete to read it, LOL I HATE not getting to see what it next :P
person Snakelette
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh, what happens next? I want to find out soon, please? I like it lots!
person gitana
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw darling thanks for thanking me, you're very welcome, I lliked this chapter, please update soon!
person DB1
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6 Awesome story i love it please update soon.

*DB*
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
vampire love, I love it I love it please more update's today soon.
person misslala
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay more to the story!! Can't wait for more. I love vampires.
person gitana
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, keep it up, and update soon please!
person Snakelette
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginning! Love it, so keep going!
person misslala
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I suppose the only thing to was odd or out of place was the Star Wars comment but overall, I liked it. :) Interested in reading more.