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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Please keep on writing. I want Riddick and Harry to end up together. I wonder does Riddiock have "creature" magic?
Thanks.
Jade
Thanks.
Jade
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yum. submissive kitty harry!!! with sexy beast riddick. must have more. update soon dearest cause this is gonna be yummy.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this. want to know where its going please write more. If you could send me an email when you post again that would be great. and please don't wait too long between posts.
Thanx,
Griffyn
Thanx,
Griffyn
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I like...Please email when the next chapter is released:
motherhen@advancedanime.com
motherhen@advancedanime.com
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like this story very much, hope you update soon...:)
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the way things are going can't wait tell the next chapter comes out
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am not into the whole guy guy thing but i like the story
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far, it's quite interesting and well-written.
I agree that this should be Riddick/Harry pairing, either without or maybe better with Draco joining them.
I can't wait to see how you'll get Riddick to Hogwarts, so many different ways to choose from (spell, potion, some kind of dimensional portal or a strange artifact or even Harry's wandless magic or even Voldemort uses a dark ritual to summon a creature that will be stronger than Harry).
I guess that you'll go with Riddick being Harry's mate or something similar (otherwise there's not really too much point in that dream sequence). I only hope that it won't be one of those "soul-mate fics". When I think about Riddick, I always imagine a predator, so almost everything he does is based on instinct. The same goes to sex or to chosing his mate. I mean a more basic, feral need, animalistic attraction and not that sappy "two halves of one soul" or "there's only one that completes me" crap.
I'd like to see a bit of a fight for dominance between Riddick, Harry and Draco. I like the concept of sub!Harry but I believe he won't submit without a good fight, so no feminine or helpless Harry.
In your story Harry is a cat-like creature based on his eyes, ears, tail (I think it would be good to add at some point fangs or at least slightly longer incissors, lets say they show only at the sight of blood or as an emotional reaction to something (when he is angry or freightened)).
I think that the changes in Harry's appearance should be accompanied by changes in his nature.
For example:
- likes soft materials,
- likes different food,
- has strange reactions to different smells,
- likes physical contact a lot more than before (hugs, pats on arm or shoulder, even small pecks to someone's cheek or forehead - I got this stupid vision of Harry kissing Snape's cheek or even McGonnagal's),
- start liking attention or hides from everyone, maybe even has a few emotional outbursts because someone looks at him in a strange way,
- has an urge to mark his territory or thinks abut certain people as his.
Hell, he can even start liking spending time with Mrs. Figg's cats or cats start to trail after him or listen to him or want to please him (he works in the garden, a cat walkes up to him, lays a dead mouse in front of him and waits for Harry's approval - happened to me when I was five).
It would be fun if he did some of these things without even realising it. I've read too many fics where Harry suddenly sprouts a tail and/or wings, but he casts glamour and no one notices anything different about him, he founds his mate and everything is great and he is just a normal human being and they live happily ever after.
Other thing is that cats live in prides, and a pride needs its alpha or its leader (of course Riddick sooner or later). So I would give Harry a need to live in something similar pride-structure, lets say that he sees Hermione or Ginny as a Huntress, Ron as a Guard or Protector, well you can base it on real cat prides or you can create it yourself.
Sorry, I really got carried away this time, but too late now.
So to sum it all up:
- really like your fic, can't wait for the next part
- hope you'll use some of my ideas
- but: YOUR FIC ==> YOUR CHOICE
I agree that this should be Riddick/Harry pairing, either without or maybe better with Draco joining them.
I can't wait to see how you'll get Riddick to Hogwarts, so many different ways to choose from (spell, potion, some kind of dimensional portal or a strange artifact or even Harry's wandless magic or even Voldemort uses a dark ritual to summon a creature that will be stronger than Harry).
I guess that you'll go with Riddick being Harry's mate or something similar (otherwise there's not really too much point in that dream sequence). I only hope that it won't be one of those "soul-mate fics". When I think about Riddick, I always imagine a predator, so almost everything he does is based on instinct. The same goes to sex or to chosing his mate. I mean a more basic, feral need, animalistic attraction and not that sappy "two halves of one soul" or "there's only one that completes me" crap.
I'd like to see a bit of a fight for dominance between Riddick, Harry and Draco. I like the concept of sub!Harry but I believe he won't submit without a good fight, so no feminine or helpless Harry.
In your story Harry is a cat-like creature based on his eyes, ears, tail (I think it would be good to add at some point fangs or at least slightly longer incissors, lets say they show only at the sight of blood or as an emotional reaction to something (when he is angry or freightened)).
I think that the changes in Harry's appearance should be accompanied by changes in his nature.
For example:
- likes soft materials,
- likes different food,
- has strange reactions to different smells,
- likes physical contact a lot more than before (hugs, pats on arm or shoulder, even small pecks to someone's cheek or forehead - I got this stupid vision of Harry kissing Snape's cheek or even McGonnagal's),
- start liking attention or hides from everyone, maybe even has a few emotional outbursts because someone looks at him in a strange way,
- has an urge to mark his territory or thinks abut certain people as his.
Hell, he can even start liking spending time with Mrs. Figg's cats or cats start to trail after him or listen to him or want to please him (he works in the garden, a cat walkes up to him, lays a dead mouse in front of him and waits for Harry's approval - happened to me when I was five).
It would be fun if he did some of these things without even realising it. I've read too many fics where Harry suddenly sprouts a tail and/or wings, but he casts glamour and no one notices anything different about him, he founds his mate and everything is great and he is just a normal human being and they live happily ever after.
Other thing is that cats live in prides, and a pride needs its alpha or its leader (of course Riddick sooner or later). So I would give Harry a need to live in something similar pride-structure, lets say that he sees Hermione or Ginny as a Huntress, Ron as a Guard or Protector, well you can base it on real cat prides or you can create it yourself.
Sorry, I really got carried away this time, but too late now.
So to sum it all up:
- really like your fic, can't wait for the next part
- hope you'll use some of my ideas
- but: YOUR FIC ==> YOUR CHOICE
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!! me love riddick/harry stories so much!!! i'm not that excited about adding draco into the pairing but i will be open minded. but harry/riddick is hot. love this so far, want more please. how are we gonna tie harry now to riddick? very intruiged.