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for Blind Beauty

by slashpervert

person NightLo
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually by this time, others and the order should discover Harry's disappearance and are acting, would Draco contact them to raise their hope?
person NightLo
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I have lost the pass of time - how long has Harry been captured? And will the order do something?
person norisch1
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is starting out so perfectly, I love the whole helpless love aspect.

person graballz
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 2 and 3--AHA! I had you pegged from the first chapter!!!!! I AM JELLO AND LOVING IT!!!!!!!! This is SO GREAT!

Quick thing: In your disclaimer (the green one at the top) I think you mean "JKR" owns them (not "RKR").

Okay, now back to the good stuff. I am curious as hell as to what's going to happen (how Draco gets Harry out of there, unblinds him...well, how they got in there, etc) but honestly, if this was 50 chapters of Harry tied to the bed having sex with Draco, I wouldn't be complaining in the least.

Bravo you! Draco's going to bottom at some point, right? And I LOVE this plotline! LOVE it!
person kittycat30
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please update soon!!
person graballz
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4--DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!!!!! I WAS SO EXCITED TO SEE THE FAST UPDATE, AND THEN YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *screaming in frustration and tears* Draco! Harry! My babies!

Draco has to "rape" Harry...but you can't rape the willing, so bring on the dirty talk and BDSM, baby! It's going to turn out that the whole BDSM (where you have a code word, just in case) turns them on and they didn't even know, right? RIGHT!!!!!! Because Harry and Draco with dirty talk, pain/pleasure, and dominant/submissive is SO HOT as long as they are both enjoying their roles! (mmmmmmm Draco the dominant sadist and Harry the submissive masochist.......and he gets off on it!)

RIGHT????? UPDATE! NOW! PLEASE! BEFORE I DIE!
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so beautiful. I was seriously tearing up there at the end. I can't imagine what Draco must be going through. I mean sure it's hard for Harry too but he seems to understand better then poor, insecure, vulerable Draco lol. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person NightLo
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really a very 'desperate' plan - very torturous indeed, something like S&M, though both of them never ask for it...as you haven't mentioned who are the captors, who are involved, whether are they at the basecamp or not, or is it near Voldi...much cannot be guessed. So I would patiently wait for your update!

I would like to ask one more question - can their love sustain this? Or will there be more concrete plan/actions?
person NightLo
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...as I double checked the warning and summary - I know Voldi is still nowhere near, so Draco now must write a huge thank you note to the captor (and I seriously guessing that would either be Lucius or Snape) - who else would trust and place Draco in this place without monitoring in a day and two. Actually Harry now is on Draco's mercy, no matter sleeping, eating, or going to the loo, so Draco must thank the captor.

However, in order to keep Harry as his forever, a plan must hatch soon...so please update soon.
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

Oh wow, mmmm... This was quite delicious. I was so happy to see more from you!! I can't even tell you. Are you both writing this one, too?