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for Blind Beauty

by slashpervert

schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Well written! I love it! Update asap please!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kittycat30
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!! Such a cliffie!! Please update again soon!
person Selera
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your next chapters.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::victory dance:: haha they kicked Voldermort's ass! LOL I'm sooo happy their plan worked! Well now they have to do something about the others but at least they killed him. Yay! Love the story!
person graballz
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, was I gone that long??? Damn! My last review was Chapter 4; the story's now double that!!! YAY!

Chapter 5--OH MY GOD YOU WENT FOR THE HARD ONE, DIDN'T YOU???? I can handle the whips...and the blood....and the pain....(mantra: Harry's a masochist, Harry's a masochist.....MY POOR BABIES!!!!) But CRUCIO???? That's Unforgivable!!! (yes, I mean it both ways) FUUUUUUCK, MY DRACO!!!!!! HARRY!!!!!! IT'LL BE OKAY, HONEYS, IT'LL BE OKAY!!!!!! *whimper*

FUCK!!! And now, as soon as Draco starts acting sappy, I get scared and I'm like, "No! No!! Make it believable!! Don't let the Dark Bastard find out!"

*GASP* VOLDEMORT!!! I got so caught up in Harry and Draco that I forgot who was behind this!!!! VOLDEMORT AND LUCIUS!!!!! I'M COMING FOR THE BOTH OF YOU, YOU FUCKS!!!!! DIE DIE DIE

*squeak* *gasp* *whimper* I LOVE YOU, BABIES!!! I can't believe I'm saying this, but it's for the best and you can do it!!!

NO NO NO BOYS!!!! YOU'RE BOTH JUST BLOODY BRILLIANT ACTORS!!! KUDOS TO YOU!!!! I hate it too, Harry!!!!!!!!!! IT'S FOR LOVE!!!


Chapter 6--FUCK YOU LUCIUS I'LL KILL YOU!!!!! STOP THAT!!!!! BAD LUCIUS!!!!! LEAVE HARRY ALONE OR I'LL KILL YOU AND REVIVE YOU AND KILL YOU AGAIN!!!!!!1 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

*WHIMPER* *CRYING* HARRY!!! HARRY! MY DRACO'S HARRY!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABY!!!! OH. MY. BLOODY. FUCKING. GOD.

I hate you, Lucius. I fucking hate you. *scary deadpan voice*
person graballz
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7--What the fuck???? Now I'm all riled up again!!!! LUCIUS, YOU'RE GONNA DIE A HORRIBLE, PAINFUL CANE-IN-YOUR-ASS DEATH!!!!! LET GO OF MY DRACO!!!!!! MINE!!!! MINE AND HARRY'S!!!!!!

oh my god ohmygod OH MY GOD OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!! FUCK you've blindsided me again!!!! Well done!!!! I LOVE IT!!! OH FUCK YOU, LUCIUS!!!!! Crucio on his own son?????? SONOFABITCH

OHMYGOD THAT'S THE SICKEST, MOST SADISTIC THING I'VE READ SO FAR EVER!!!! (Do you have any idea how turned on I am???? I have GOT to be one of the world's sickest, most twisted, fucked up bitches EVER to get turned on by this!!!!!!)

I LOVE YOU! THIS IS GREAT! *jealous* I wish I'd thought of it, and at the same time, I'm going to kill Lucius yet again and revive him.

AWWWWWW I kinda hoped they would hold each other after that....THEY BOTH NEED MAJOR HUGS!!!!
person graballz
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8--I'm terrified (in the best way possible) to read this....how can you POSSIBLY top Chapter 7????? (Lucky fucking 7....DAMN)

YES YES YES THE HUGS THEY SO BADLY NEED!!! Well, actually, I'm the one who needs them to hug! haha I'm so fucking pathetic!

OH SHIT OH FUCK I JUST YELLED TOO LOUDLY!!!!!!!! FUUUUUUUUCK Okay, I've been so riveted and horrified by the "show" and Harry just DID IT!!! FUUUUCKING YESSSSSSSSSSS EAT BATSHIT, YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!

FUCKING YES!!! Wait, wait, Fenrir pinned who to the ground?? Harry or Draco???? If it's Draco, FUCK OFF, FENNY!!!! You think you're scary as a werewolf??? YOU AIN'T SEEN NOTHING COMPARED TO A PISSED OFF GRABALLZ!!!!!

If it's Harry...he should be going un-blind right about now, and in that case, werewolf steak, anyone?? OH OH I'LL HAVE SOME!!!! DON'T BOTHER COOKING IT! IF HE TOUCHES MY DRACO'S HARRY, I'LL JUST BITE IT OUT OF HIM!!!!!

FUCK YOU, DEATH EATERS!!!!! HARRY AND DRACO IN DA HOUSE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON (PS your cliffies are killing me!)
person graballz
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And just so you know, your Chapter 7 has the top spot in my book, so I wanted to congratulate you by dedicating a separate review just to the scenes depicted in Chapter 7.

I thought I had read it all, but FUCK! No, no, I haven't!
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GO HARRY AND DRAKY!!! WOOP! I love them :) Great story, keep it comming. You never fail to amaze me.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

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That's all.