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for Blind Beauty

by slashpervert

person NightLo
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...now we must find some ways out for Draco - if he continues in this way, with nothing to do or no use to Harry and others, his pride will not allow this. Sure there must be somethings/some helps he can offer, would Remus help him to find out? For Harry's blindness - well, I will just wait and read on.

But I do remember there are many problems unsolved, e.g. escaped Lucius (an obvious threat to Draco and Harry), Snape (is he dead? I remember you have mentioned once, but would love to find out how did he die), Ron, Hermione and Ginny's action to Draco, the damn Ministry and the press...Or just said - those that are manipulative with Draco's and Harry's lives!

Lastly ,please don't make up something like 'Draco helps blind Harry to fix everything then leaves' - I do believe, every decision between a couple must be consensual! Even Draco determines to leave, he owes Harry a proper reason!
person Selera
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww so sweet.
person misslala
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice follow up, the sex is hot as ever and I am looking forward to more and what happens when he goes to get his wand...will he ever regain his vision?
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18! That paper!
person graballz
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14--Apologies for being absent! (Not enough hours in the day, y'know?)

OH YAY! Picking up right where we left off.....IN THE BEDROOM! :D Mmmmmmmm, Draco's naked...Harry's getting there....Draco's MORE graceful than before? (Isn't that, like, too much grace for one person to handle? lmao j/k)

Draco's claws ARE sharp...yikes! I mean, I'm a masochist and all, BUT...oh good! Quidditch gloves! Why didn't I think of that? *focus* Not important...Oh, babies! (Not a good topic, I see!) *hugs all around* It'll be okay! *blushing madly* haha I just hugged naked Harry and Draco! *dies happily* (j/k)

Ohh, I love it when Harry's dirty mouth comes into play! FUCKING love it! (And OMG just so you know, I reread Chapter 7 sometimes...JUST Chapter 7...SO fucking twisted and I LOVE IT!)

Awwwww, I love the banter/discussion! They have their own way of communicating, and it's so sweet! Everything IS different!

Oh HOT! HOT HOT HOT!!!! YESSSSSS Oh fuck! YES I love that Draco's coaching him! (I know they've *done it* before and all...well, Draco has...and I love seeing just *how* 1. Draco became the Sex God that he is and 2. Harry's becoming a Sex God...lmao

OH MY FUCKING GOD! "Feel me, find me, fill me!" OH fucking hell, that was SO BLOODY HOTTTTT! (And I love that Draco's not patronizing Harry's blindness, etc)

*loses it* GOD I just MELT when DRACO talks dirty!!!!!!!!!!! I can't fucking handle it!!!!! *hotness overload* and it's AWESOME!!!!!

*whimper* I feel senseless too......and there was no fucking involved on my part! haha Just some DAMN nice hottttt gay teen sex! YUMMY!

And right now, damn it! My alarm is going off, and so I know I still have Chapter 15 to review, but I won't have a chance to do so until tonight, so I'm so sorry!!! Grrrrrrrrr...until then, though!

If I were wearing a hat right now, I would take it off! (ie "Hats off to you!") because this was a smashingly HOT chapter!
person misslala
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RAWR! That was a got chapter! I am looking forward to more!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have absolutely never read anything like this, so good, you are great!
person NightLo
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...I am quite sure that Tonks and Remus must be staying somewhere downstairs or in a room...you know, they don't have a wand and so no silencing charm is put...with such intense play...probably all know what is going on - but I just wonder - why doesn't Draco get hungry? He hasn't eaten much in the Azkaban and in the Grimmauld Place, right? (not counting the meal brought by Kingsley)
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY schemollies!
person Selera
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! YES YES YES! MORE!