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June 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was with you until you used rape as a plot device. (Chapter 33) That's never okay.
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June 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
also wanted to say that I agreed with the reviewer who said that Harry and Draco seemed strangely emotionally detched
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September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lucius, is a sick and disgusting man. No, not man, monster. I want to kill him so bad. If I found out my husband ever did that to any of my children, I would murder him a thousand times, I wouldn't care what happened to me, just to protect my child.
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September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't care to read Top Harry at all, so I skip those parts. I love it that you have mostly Draco on top.
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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
...Rape, Torture, Incest, Sadism, all dark topics, and if done in the right way, could have the strongest man turning away in disgust or horror.
I am going to be blunt, while reading this I didn't feel ANYTHING. Not sympathy much less empathy towards either Harry or Draco. The events didn't manage to reach down a squeeze my heart, much less tingle my skin. If anything I just thought it was mildly cute at the beginning...and wondered why the characters seemed so detached to the situation as a whole.
Sure they cried, screamed, and was in obvious pain...but the emotions along with those events were stunted. I expected much more inner conflict then was given. Basic anger, lust, and pain isn't going to cut it.
I also noticed GUILT should have played a heavy part in this story...only it wasn't even mentioned!? How is that even possible? Draco is raping the guy he claims to love, and yet he still manages to be lustful (Hypocrite) and angry that his thing (Harry) is getting touched.
Frustration, Helplessness, Guilt, Sadness, Despair, Hopeful, Fury, Rage, Disgust, these were the emotions I was searching for...and none were found.
This is why Torture, Rape, and Sadism are so hard to write. Not many Authors are willing to take it to the next level in fear of losing readers. Don't get me wrong, It's not like I get off on this, but I do want the characters emotions to pop out and drag me down with them.
Point: Emotions are very complicated, and when you are able to express that through your characters without going over board then this would be a really good story that I would recommend people too.
I am going to be blunt, while reading this I didn't feel ANYTHING. Not sympathy much less empathy towards either Harry or Draco. The events didn't manage to reach down a squeeze my heart, much less tingle my skin. If anything I just thought it was mildly cute at the beginning...and wondered why the characters seemed so detached to the situation as a whole.
Sure they cried, screamed, and was in obvious pain...but the emotions along with those events were stunted. I expected much more inner conflict then was given. Basic anger, lust, and pain isn't going to cut it.
I also noticed GUILT should have played a heavy part in this story...only it wasn't even mentioned!? How is that even possible? Draco is raping the guy he claims to love, and yet he still manages to be lustful (Hypocrite) and angry that his thing (Harry) is getting touched.
Frustration, Helplessness, Guilt, Sadness, Despair, Hopeful, Fury, Rage, Disgust, these were the emotions I was searching for...and none were found.
This is why Torture, Rape, and Sadism are so hard to write. Not many Authors are willing to take it to the next level in fear of losing readers. Don't get me wrong, It's not like I get off on this, but I do want the characters emotions to pop out and drag me down with them.
Point: Emotions are very complicated, and when you are able to express that through your characters without going over board then this would be a really good story that I would recommend people too.
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved! Excellent work.
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a bloody amazing story and please pardon my language, I fucking love it... just another mater pieces....very well done story and the plots and the up and down, just beyond words....thank you so much for such wonderful awesome creation and magnificent good read. love it. just love it. thank you!!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
quite good. and i didn't cry for this one. Death to Lucius! sorry, just had to get that out. never did like him much. i can see Narcissa being nice but never him.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was tough to read when harry was raped
especially, in front of the one he loved
i was gonna cry when i read it
he had sacrificed so much in his life
he had done nothing wrong
but look what he got
i think that's too much for a little person TT^TT
i really like this story
i can feel what the characters feel
and get upset what they are upset
the message is clearly sent
i truly think this is a well written story ^^
especially, in front of the one he loved
i was gonna cry when i read it
he had sacrificed so much in his life
he had done nothing wrong
but look what he got
i think that's too much for a little person TT^TT
i really like this story
i can feel what the characters feel
and get upset what they are upset
the message is clearly sent
i truly think this is a well written story ^^
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Does your creative well never empty? Fantastic story. One of the most deformed pieces. Only you could pull off ensnaring us with a blind harry and a furry draco. I'm off to read the sequel.