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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is by far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. This sounds like it could be written by JK Rowling. The plot is fantastic, and it provides many twists and turns. What I especially like about what you did was keeping track of everyone, but staying true to Harry most of all, instead of giving them all an equal amount. Snape was esquisite: I did not see that coming. Keep up the excellent work, but I have noticed one small plot hole: Voldemort has only six Horcruxes, not seven. The diray, the ring, the locket, the cup, something that was Ravenclaw's or Gryfindors (not one of each) and the snake. It says so clearly on page 503 of Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. On the second paragraph, not counting the one that had already been begun, it reads,
"I am glad to see you appreciate the magnitude of the problem," said Dumbledore calmly. "But firstly Harry, no, Harry, not seven Horcruxes,: six."
Other than that minor plothole (which destroyed my suspicion that you are actually JK Rowling in disquise), this story is perfect. If you have an explanation for the seven Horcruxes that I missed, please email me back. Can't wait for an update.
"I am glad to see you appreciate the magnitude of the problem," said Dumbledore calmly. "But firstly Harry, no, Harry, not seven Horcruxes,: six."
Other than that minor plothole (which destroyed my suspicion that you are actually JK Rowling in disquise), this story is perfect. If you have an explanation for the seven Horcruxes that I missed, please email me back. Can't wait for an update.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story series, my favorite on the whole site
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well just finished what there is of Harry's seventh year and I just wanted to tell you I can't wait for more. I would normally say a story is one of the best I've ever read, but in this instance I have to say that your story was the best story that I have ever read. And thats saying something sence I starting reading Harry Potter fan-fics about a year ago when I started at Veritaserum.com, then to mugglenet.com, and finally to here. Over about a thousand stories your is what I truly believe the best. thank you for writing and I hope you continiue this story.
Keeper of the Sword
Keeper of the Sword
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last part in one of the best, if not the best fan fics ive ever written! Cant wait to see it updatd!! Maybe you could do an 8th year...
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff. This is my favorite fic..been a while for Pansy and Neville.. (hint).
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoops, I forgot to return and review...
Well who would have thunk it, the last Horcrux
at the Dursley's - oh sweet irony - loved it.
Now let's go kick some Voldy arse!!!
Well who would have thunk it, the last Horcrux
at the Dursley's - oh sweet irony - loved it.
Now let's go kick some Voldy arse!!!
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I have read the other parts of the series and I absolutely adored them! I wanted to cry when I reached the end of 12 and realized more hadn't been written yet. You are sooo talented and I can't wait to read more.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And so we get the first of the last chapter of one of the greatest fanfics it has ever been my pleasure to read. I will be sorry to see this end but I look forward to every last piece of it as it comes to us. Thank you for such a great labor of love. It is truly fantastic!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaynessss!! Thanks!
Will read now <3
Will read now <3