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for The Inadequate Life

by metafrantic

person aok1992
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to see the inventions
person TifLaw
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading. Brilliant start, I really liked that first chapter. The rest of the story is quite excellent as well. Can't wait for the next part. Update soon.
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh thanks for the smut :)
Lots of good things happening now with the DA, I love Harry's leadership and Ginny's understanding of just what he needs to relax, such a good wifey!
But I especially liked in this chap Ron's show of maturelism in face of the twins. Go Ron! Hermione really should reward him with a threesome ;p (hehe, don't mind me, I'm just a perv - but Draco does come to mind - on dear, I'll stop now. At this rate I'll have you writing part 14 *smiles dreamly*)
person kodiac
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was such a great chapter i only have one question since u have all those ravenclaws working together do u think they could find a cure for hermione please
person Amanda
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for an update! Do you have an email list so you can email me when you update?
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are ya quittin? I know the book draws nigh, but I really like your perspective.
person Wiz
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLZ hurry up and update... i think that this is good enough to be a book...
person ecorate
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good work update soon
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well done, love the story so far....when will u have and update? can u email me when u post new chapters?
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Humm, not yet huh? I'll check in again tomorrow, I'm patient but when a story is this good it's hard not to want quicker updates.

They have a free evening, to me that means SMUT! Am I right? Come on man, I'm dying here!!

Hehe(jk) I'll take whatever, smut or no, because I know it will be great. I just want it now!

Oh, and please update soon!!!