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for The Inadequate Life

by metafrantic

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Better all the time..
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah, but this is marvolous!!! It's a habit for me to check for updates daily, even if you just updated, and many times before you have surprised me with back to back updates. But girl, this is amazing! You are working on overtime!! You have one weeks time and I bet you will be finished by then... this will be a great week, yeh-ahs! You go girl!

*happily bouncing off to read read read*
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That's all I can say...
I hope you keep writing cause it's not that long till The deathly hallows arrive..
The 21th, I believe.
Once again, wonderful story
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a long wait for this update, but boy it's like what, 6 chapters long, love it thanks.

Truly enjoyed Ginny really getting down to what her feelings for Harry really are, although I worried there for a moment, I mean I love Luna and H/G/L smut is great, but come on she can never replace the Boy Who Lived. I love their love, George just better step up his game, lol.

And yeah, Neville/Pansy are in some kind of a drought, do something about that, please?

Can't wait for the final battle and Hermione's role in that, sounds like it will be mind blowing, yeah! bring it on!!

Also, I too would have really liked to have seen this finished before Deathly Hallows, but as that seems impossible (real life be damned), I want you to know that you have to continue, please don't leave it because it's AU or whatever. I love this story and I will follow it till the end :)
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This continues to be great stuff, but I'm sure Neville and Pansy are becoming rather frustrated by now...
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the blood theory, it sounds like a likely possibility for DH, but even if it isn't that's very good guessing, I love it! As a matter of fact I love most of your theories in this story, must be why I love it so much, and why it's so popular!

The smut was hot as always, even if those are lesser couplings that I don't think much of except were they relate to the trio or Ginny or maybe Draco, but yeah it was pretty hot nonetheless.

Update soon please.
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you think you'll finish before the book?
person kodiac
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
horay for the update great chapter
person Bonza87
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking good and i've only just finished the first chapter.

Just one issue, you listed six Horcruxes that had been destroyed (Diary, Ring, Nagini, Slytherin's Locket, Hufflepuff's Cup and Ravenclaw's Tablet.) then added Godric's Gauntlet to the mix..

According to the Harry Potter world, there were only ever 6 Horcruxes made, as the seventh bit of Voldemort's soul had to stay inside of him so that he could continue to exist.

just thought i'd mention it :)