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It bothers me that when Harry thinks about himself having sex with a guy, he automatically assumes he will be on receiving end. You're no going do him into bottom, are you? Because if so, I would really like the warning - I very, very fond and intrigued at your story, but I * hate * bottom!Harry with passion. I always thought he deserves at least equal relationship, although I would rather put him on charge, because I trust him to not hurt his partner and take care of him, and I'm sure Harry will be perfect at taking care about someone and showering him in his love. I also think Harry needs to be one, making decisions about this part of his life, because so much others aspects of his life was out of his control.
I wonder about Harry's relationships with other Gryffindors. He is seventeen, just like them, and he had so much more deadly experiences in his life, as well as his life with Dursley, that he must be even more mature than them all. Yet, he for some reason, still looks up to them, as if they were some father-figures for him. Please! They just children in comparison with him. And if he * is * look at James as his father, doesn't it perverted for him to have any sexual actions together?
It's the same with Gryffindors, also. Harry is seventeen, but he looks fourteen now, isn't he? How can James take sexual actions towards his son, if he sees Harry as such, and towards fourteen child at that? Doesn't it seems at least strange to you?
Ok, now about Draco's try of killing Harry. He cast Avada Kedavra, unforgivable, so why he is still at Hogwarts? He must be in Azkaban already, especially since there are rumors spreading about this at Hogwarts. Even if he under-aged (that he isn't, even if he now fourteen), he must be at least expelled, and had his wand broken. And since they can't expel him (where he will go to, Malfoy Manor?), they MUST take his wand! And to ignore such crime is extremely criminal in itself. Lily, as Harry's mother and "Granger-a-like", must at least demand that from Headmaster. Especially since if it's their seventh year, she should be Head Girl right now, and James is Head Boy, according the books. So, why they didn't thought about danger Malfoy is, what with him, having already cast Avada at Harry?
And finally I wonder why now when someone knows about Peter's future betrayal, they don't take some actions about that? I don't mean punish him for something he didn't yet, but maybe, talk to him? Give him more attention? If Harry and others can do something for change Peter's future decision to betray his friends, why they don't do that? And at least Harry must think about Peter's brother's destiny as * reason * for Peter's betrayal. So, why don't he? He was so paranoid and suspicious in his six year, about Draco and all, and since he WAS right, he must be very suspicious and paranoid right now, but why he acting so un-mature and careless?

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I just read throught the whole story and it was good. I especailly liked Chap. 4. Can't wait for an update. Oh, and I think it was Draco watching Harry. :)

Mmmm! Promising! I finally have time to read, when I'm not editing, and this promises to be a fun fic :-) Be well! Samayel

Chapter 4--AAAAAAUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHH EVIL! That was a GREAT chapter! and +10 for the hot sexiness at the END (when I've alredy done all of the thinking/puzzling about the plot) haha

I think it was Draco. I want it to be Draco. DRACO, DAMN IT, DRACO!!!! I love Gryffindors as much as the next guy, but Harry belongs with Draco!!!! *okay, end rant*

*growl* Harry and Regulus...Harry and Sirius...Harry and Remus...even Harry and James! (Fuck, that one is STILL a shock to me lol) You KNOW Harry's gotta be longing for Draco right about now...right? RIGHT??

Pussy, pussy, pussy....Oh, fuck I can't breathe!!!! It started out as a small giggle. Then I paused in reading the story as my giggle grew to a chuckle..then to a guffaw...then to hysterical laughter which led to a fit of coughing and now I can't fucking breathe and it's AWESOME! That was GREAT!!!!!

I can understand the Sirius/Regulus pairing in the context you've described. I, like Harry, am not horrified. That doesn't stop me from wanting Harry and Draco to get together, but I've accepted the way the Gryffindors (and Regulus) are.

And Pettigrew's twin brother? Holy shit. Sounds like something Snape would've done, if he weren't so stubborn!

and OH GOD! Harry...naked....in the shower...*whimper* HOTTTTT! (DracoDracoDraco)

Just wanted to say thanks for the mention, too! Really sweet of you! I love reading your stories, so it's just as good that you like reading my reviews of your stories! lol

Well, the watcher could be either Draco or Regulus, but hell who knows it could even be Snape for all I know. Enjoying your well spun tale. Please continue as I'll be waiting for more.

Chapter 2--Wow, I was certainly eloquent in my review of the first chapter, now wasn't I? *grins* Although, I swear I wrote a more thorough review of this story, saying something along the lines of "OH MY GOD HOW CAN YOU KEEP ALL OF THIS STRAIGHT"...roughly. But my internet's been screwy for the past couple of days, so I wouldn't be surprised if I HAD written it, only to get kicked off the net before being able to post it. *shrug*

As for Chapter 2........OMFG SOOOOOOOOOOO did not expect the...um..."morning" scenes! I hyperventilated for about five minutes...and WOW....I'm.....still in shock. I mean, I know James isn't *technically* his father yet but damn, Harry's going to need some serious (sirius haha) therapy (OH GOD I JUST GAVE MYSELF BAD BAD MENTAL PICTURES) before this is all said and done.

And the ending of Chapter 2 left me breathless and screeching. *whimper and dies* I'm not even kidding. THANKFULLY I have Chapter 3 right here, ready to read so that I don't have to actually die from not knowing what the fuck is up with my Draco baby.

Chapter 3--*blink blink* Oh man, you're making me think with these! Not that I don't love it (I DO) but WTF??? Harry + Draco = Perfection Harry + anyone else = NO! ;) Okay, you totally scared the FUCK out of me with the AK bit! I think I just aged about 10 years.

And......Harry! *whimper* I have no idea where he was or what he was doing, but it can't be good. And of course, the combination of Draco and Snape is NEVER good! (hee hee) And..*gasp* are Sirius and Regulus...incestous? Is that why Sirius seems to be freaking out over Harry keeping Reg's handkerchief?

And I have to admit, the whole Gryffindor orgy thing kinda weirded me out, but I'm getting used to it...MAJOR PROPS to you for going where I haven't ever seen anyone go before! Can't wait for the next chapter

DAMN!!!!! I hate when people do that, espectially when i really like the story and dont want it to end. I hope you update soon.
Kat

Oh *(&^! Draco is about to change the past unless someone can stop that spell! I need chapter 3!