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Well done, well done :)

I hope you plan on continuing this story since it is really good so far. It's an interesting take on the time travel story. I'm curious about why they were turned into 14 year olds. Do you plan on changing them back anytime soon?

well it is your story and you should tell it the way you wish toand it's not like there were that many witnesses to see the curse that would tell on him.

will you be continuing this? I'm enjoying it plotholes and all

I'm only on chapter 2 but I have yo say this...

That is your future SON, James you pervert!

Gosh!

Okay I'm done lol I must go read the rest now LOL.

YES! CONTINUE THE AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You have to continue! I've gotta have more! Chapter 6 please!

Ahhh, good old Dumbledore ex machina :-) He can set things right when no one else can! As for Draco, a month is too long, he needs to be plopped into the middle of a sexy Gryffindor sandwich and shagged until AK'ing Harry is the last thing on his mind :-0!!! Peace, Samayel

Chapter 5--Wow, another mention? I feel special! *blushes* Where's thrnbrooke been, anyway? Haven't seem them around lately! *frown*

YES YES YES YES YES IT WAS DRACO!!!!!!!! FUCK INDEED! Wait, Draco, honey....you can't "FUCK" Harry if you're running the other way!!!!!! *protesting* GO BACK! Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm oh god! I didn't even THINK of that!!!! Harry's body....NO TAN LINES! YAY FOR NO TAN LINES!!!!!!!! FUCK THAT'S HOT!

YES we're going to relive it!!!!!! w00t!!!! I'M SO EXCITED! OMFG That's so cute!!!! Draco, at 11, knew that a "tiny Harry Potter" was the man of his dreams???? SO CUTE! I THINK I'M GOING TO DIE FROM CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!! *squeal*

Nicely done on the "Malfoy heir" thing! *clapping* I don't think I've ever seen that in a story before!

OH HOT! HOTHOTHOTHOT OH SHIT! oh bad!! BAD BAD BAD FUCK YOU, JAMES! GET YOUR HANDS OFF MY DRACO!

oooooooooooo, good insights onto the whole denied friendship thing! How can I think when I'm so turned on by Harry and Draco and so pissed off at James right now??? BLAHGDFWFWIO HAHA WAY TO GET 'EM BACK, HARRY!

*slow, rumbled growl in the back of my throat* James is touching my Draco's Harry again..........and James is still on my black list from earlier! Watch yourself, Potter Sr! Nobody's supposed to touch my Draco's Harry but DRACO! (and YOU'RE NOT DRACO!)

Hmmm, a ghost, eh? Oh wow, good call! HAHA Portraits cuddling! *snicker* Harry's got balls, interrupting the Fat Lady's cuddling!

Golden Dragon....that's not Draco....*suspicious* god DAMN EVERYONE wants to get their hands on Harry Potter, even 30 years in the past! (especially 30 years in the past, hehehe) I thought Draco's name meant "Bad Faith" in French.....grrrrr for flirting with someone besides Harry! Draco, you BRAT! Stop that! Wink at Harry! HARRY! OH SHIT, I'M LAUGHING SO HARD I CAN'T BREATHE!!!! HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Mmmmmmm, Harry's playing "Barbie".....THAT's a luscious thought! BAH HAHAHAHAHHAHA AWESOME! Checking each other out!!! PRICELESS

Longer chapter = longer review *shrug* Sorry. That's just the way it works lol

What I think of Drakon: NO MORE TOUCHY MY DRACO'S HARRY! AND NO MORE FLIRTING WITH DRACO! (same goes for Draco with the Greek, too!) haha Other than that....nicely done. He might be able to jump in and take Harry's place in their Gryffintastic orgies :)

Chapter 4 :-) So many interesting things. The backstory on Peter was neat! A good explanation for his distance from the others and eventual betrayal. The time theory was very interesting, and a fave subject of mine since I love metaphysics and philosophy. Your friend Rei has probably read some of the same books I have :-) Don't even get me started on chaos theory! As for the harsher criticisms some have dealt, they may be right, but we're here to have fun. If you started out aiming to creat the perfect fic, well, okay, this aint it, but if you started out aiming to have fun, it sure seems like you have, and I'm just enjoying this on its own merits...no judgements. It seems like you have a plot in mind, or at least an ending in mind, but you arent sure how to get there and you're filling in the blanks without looking for plotholes. This doesn't change the fact that the editing is pretty clean and the characters have individual personalitys, so the interactions between them are still fun. If you ever aim for a super-fic, plot the story out carefully on a pad of paper, and figure out in advance which characters are involved, what they'll be like, what will be problems for them during different parts of the story, and how it will resolve...then go back and pick it apart for errors. Most of all, don't feel bad ( I back edited Redeem Me to clear up at least 3 seperate foul ups where one chapter contradicted another...only a couple people ever noticed, so I got off easy and fixed them before anyone else commented.) Thanks for the kind words in the author notes, and if you still have ideas and a desire to put them where we can read them...keep going! Lurve, Sam