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person Seraphine
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great plot! I do wish it had a little more lead up and suspense but it's very entertaining. Also, your beta has missed a type demon in chapter 4, 'excepting', should be 'expecting', I believe. Now, I'm onto the next chapter :D
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18! I'm guessing Draco conveniently forgot to tell his friends what he'd done to Harry!
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know Harry doesn't want to get close to anyone, but maybe it's time to let him. He is way beyond depressed and sad. Time for that "silver lining", "things will get better" part.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. I read it in one setting. Can't wait for an update!!!
person NightLo
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...Has Remus asked Harry for his opinions? If not, in the end, he will suffer from his own actions!!
person Solomon
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story It gets good real good and it hangs in midair Please update Harry and Draco must be together Is the veela baby going to be a boy with blond hair and green eyes? please email Slm8364@aol.com
person NightLo
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering will you...update soon? I am still waiting!!!
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... continue... soon... PLEASE!! ^_^
person alma
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Drkluver
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh do countinue