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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a beta!!!
He or she is not doing his or her work!!!
Lots of wrong spelling, punctuation, sentence structures!!!
Please do check everything if you are not in a hurry to post.
You do take a very long time to update you know?
If you do post everyday, it will then be understandable that you have lots of mistakes. But... it does not seem to be the case!!!
Reading such English can put a reader off no matter how great the story line is!!! It gets on the nerves and it feels really uncomfortable.
Is English your main language?
Kathleen
He or she is not doing his or her work!!!
Lots of wrong spelling, punctuation, sentence structures!!!
Please do check everything if you are not in a hurry to post.
You do take a very long time to update you know?
If you do post everyday, it will then be understandable that you have lots of mistakes. But... it does not seem to be the case!!!
Reading such English can put a reader off no matter how great the story line is!!! It gets on the nerves and it feels really uncomfortable.
Is English your main language?
Kathleen
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...Harry seems more alive at that comment, and Draco did have some effects on him then!!! How will they develop??
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry should just leave. I like creature fics, but Harry is definitely getting the short end of the stick!
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need part 20!!! What did they promise Draco?
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...actually why does Harry not fight with his own? That are not his ideas and preferences...if he hates manipulations, why would he agree to these???
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hate you...but i love you too...does that make any sence...first of all i love that you made it to where draco and harry didn't have a choice but to get married...i hope that it it all ends well and they fall in love... cause every time someone makes a yaoi slash a ninja kills a gay peson...and possibly a kitten as well...but i hate you because you left a cliff hanger and now i'm close to balling my eyes out...
OWARI!!!!
OWARI!!!!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...i totally forgot to mention that i hate the fact that it takes so long to update your story...i've been waiting FOREVER to get new chaps for this story...PLEASE PLEASE post quicker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...i will love you more...and i really don't care about the spelling grammars in the story as long as it's ledgeable...(wow...did i spell that right?)
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, cant wait for an update
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to know what is going to happen!!! Great story! Wish you could update frequently...