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person Anon
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look forward to reading some more.
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 5! That was hilarious!
person SnarkyB
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I beg you, PLEASE get a beta reader.
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept, but, I don't understand your writing style???????????? *will get over it* HAHA!

Like how Draco just tells Harry he's going to get him. *laughs*
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy have mercy I need chapter 4!
person NightLo
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...using Veela magic at the very beginning, really a bright move. However, you know, Hermione and Ron and Neville and Luna will find out soon - then after Harry's telling what happened, Draco's plan might not work. Even he has Snape helping him, but with Hermione's help and Harry's will (intention not revealed yet), there maybe interesting stuff to find out. What's more, with Seamus and Dean, interesting thing maybe heard also...BTW, does Dumbledore or Minevar know about this and has plan already?
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story. i cant wait to read up on some more. but you really need a beta.

cheers!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good, very good. I can't wait for more!
person NightLo
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Harry's so smart, he figured out all by himself - without Hermione's help...things start to get interesting! What will Harry do next? And what will happen when whole school knows about THIS?
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to this very much. please update again soon.