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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I like this story very much. It was a bit odd to read from different POV, perhaps you must write before every switch *Draco's POV* or *Harry's POV* So we don't get lost at the begining of every different POV. Other than that, I'll thanking your BETA by advance for the next chapters. You know, everyon can made mystakes and who am I to say something... 1. English is not my language 2. I don't write on the NET.
I will be waiting to read more of your story. Thanks a lot.
I like this story very much. It was a bit odd to read from different POV, perhaps you must write before every switch *Draco's POV* or *Harry's POV* So we don't get lost at the begining of every different POV. Other than that, I'll thanking your BETA by advance for the next chapters. You know, everyon can made mystakes and who am I to say something... 1. English is not my language 2. I don't write on the NET.
I will be waiting to read more of your story. Thanks a lot.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Professor, sent you an e-mail, just so you know. Thought I might catch your attention here a little easier...lol. Talk to you soon.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for morning! Need chapter 8!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This, simply put, is an excellent story so far. I'm totally enjoying it and anxious for more! I would have to agree that you could use a beta, but it doesn't stop the story from being good. If you would be willing to take the chance, on someone you don't know, I would be happy to beta for you. Just drop me an e-mail or something and let me know. BTW...THANX for what could be considered the best review I have ever received! No one has ever considered me their God before...lol. Well until next time have fun in the writing world!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will read and review...I will read and review...I will-- *blink* --Huh? where am I? *looks around* Oh...well, since I'm here.
I'm really enjoying this. I've read several HPDM creature fics, some more dark than others, but I find myself laughing over Draco's arrogance and Harry's fuming. Oh, my...Draco thinks he's "conquered all" and he's probably in for a bad shock once Harry comes back to his senses. Poor Mr. Veela is gonna get hexed (or beaten) into next week. LOL
Keep up the good work!
I'm really enjoying this. I've read several HPDM creature fics, some more dark than others, but I find myself laughing over Draco's arrogance and Harry's fuming. Oh, my...Draco thinks he's "conquered all" and he's probably in for a bad shock once Harry comes back to his senses. Poor Mr. Veela is gonna get hexed (or beaten) into next week. LOL
Keep up the good work!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter a little confusing with how you suddenly went into 1st person with both of them but still good.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter. i cant wait for more. but one suggestion, though; you need a beta since you're mixing your tenses and messing up grammar/spelling.
cheer!
cheer!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
also...your mixing up the POV you're writing in...
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
harry is going to wake up and Kill Draco. yep, kill him. there's no way harry will not wake up and not comit some type of bodily harm against Draco and draco doesn't really get it that he kinda over stepped his place and bounderies. please update soon! loved it!
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Professor, that last chapter was great. You took me there! Please update soon.