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Oh my gosh, I really want to smack Draco upside his head right now. That was just wrong.

very very good story
keep going and post soon
bye bye

So technically speaking - Draco has committed a crime - rxxxx Harry (sorry, just hate this word so much), and consequently, Harry would just confirm once again that Draco needs sex/submission more than love...under such situation, how would a broken unwanted Harry react? What would Draco do...to prove that he really loves Harry?

Actually after this incident, I knew why we may no longer want the two together, as this is a crime. I must say, Draco must prove his love well before a happy ending is set...maybe helping Harry, protecting Harry from attacks...when one thinks he is unwanted and broken (and used, losing all pride and dignity), usually they will commit some suicidal actions...better let Draco find out and stop Harry... or even stand up and fight against death eaters/Narcissa/Lucius!

Well...I must say, Ron, Hermione, Blaise and Pansy are not helping either, they just want to save themselves but not Draco and Harry.

Wow. Amazing
Update soon.

Oh this is bad! Very very bad! I soooo need chapter 13!

Hahaha! What a lovely little twist ^_^
Maybe Harry won't be so high strung now he's gotten some ass... well more like given some ass #evil perverted snicker#

wow i think draco said ohh no bc harry prolly going to get pregnant....its what i think.

I like this story but you 'really' have to do something about your spelling and punctuation. In this last chapter, practically every second word was spelled wrong. It makes it very hard to read. Other than that, you're doing well, I think it's quite interesting.

OMG, why did he do that? Why, why, why couldn

What did he do? Please don't make us wait too long!!! This story is really getting good. Please update soon.