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schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
person pixie0714
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your fic. When you get this, I hope that you contact me and is able to tell me that you are continuing on with the story. Stopping now will be a waste to a great plot.
person B
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. Please continue.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, I just wanted to ask you if you could maybe add a few spaces here and there because it gets really hard to read if everything is just posted in one go without any paragraphs...thanks :)
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Please post more soon :)
person SP777 [ain't logging in, will do it towards the end]
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I AM enjoying this, MUCH anticipation and dark sense of humor. :-)

Now about chpater 19, I'm not sure if this was mentioned, I loved the little sneaky words you threw in this chapter, but Ludacris is spelled wrong..there is no 'u'.
person SP777
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
con't...

in other words there is only ONE 'u' in Ludacris, not two.
person SP777
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
con't...

in other words there is only ONE 'u' in Ludacris, not two.
person casia
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really great and I can't wait to read more of it. but I'm going to say something now i never said before (because I'm a sucker for happy endings): please, let this end bad! I don't care if Harry kills himself or just rejects Malfoy for the rest of his life, but I don't want a Happy End. Harry is to damaged and Draco, he doesn't love him. Everything he did so far was in his best interests, he never cared what Harry wanted. Harry is broken, yes, and may need help, but draco is just breaking him more and trying to fix Harry into something new, something Draco wants.
That's all

PS: I undertand completily if you write a happy end, because it's your story after all, but i thiought maybe there's till the chance ofr a bad end.

PPS: Sry, if my english is bad, but it's not my mother tongue and i just really wanted to let you know what i thought
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! my e-mail's lars.jiyae@gmail.com, can I please ask you to send me news of chapter updating as it bacomes available? I'm in love with your story - cheers! :)