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for Burning Desire/Happy Birthday

by ProfessorSibly

schedule July 26, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Great story about attraction, first love, and H & G getting busy.  Generally well written, but still in need of a good edit for spelling and grammar mistakes.  Does a good job of tapping into the emotions that motivate Harry and Ginny, too.

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really need a beta.
person AlexiDrake
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So after reading this....

Please keep the chapters coming for this is a great story!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Not exactly how I would have imagined a confrontation between Ginny and Harry, but it's still pretty damn good. Awesome Job!
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes...me likey, likey!