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OMG!!!!!!!
That was bloody brilliant! To have writing it down in the diray, and then stopping to take care of 'problem' and then having Malfoy watching OH YEA! That was friggin' hot!!!
If you plan to continue, please do so!!!!
Have her catch Malfoy reading her journal, maybe even taking care of his 'problem' whilst doing so. That would be so yummy!!!!
Great work!

Wow! That was extremely HOT!! I'm hoping that Draco reads her diary soon and well... you know. Great, sexy stuff, here!

Mindblowing :) Update!

I will be nice to you and tell you (notice not yelling or storming away) that you NEED a beta. It's a great little ficlet, but the spelling and grammar were a real turn off. On the bright side, the sex scene was hot :-) Good Luck! Keep writing, every time you do it will get better.

it good! :)