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I do hope you'll bring in the twins and Bill. I adore them! And about the pairings, if you do start one, I hope it will be either Draco/Harry or Voldemort/Harry. and of course Lucius/Severus (or the other way around), since it seems there was something there.
though I have to ask, what will they do with Voldemort? if Voldemort's mind is still being poisoned he won't accept any reasoning will he? or insinuations that he isn't in his right mind...
helping with a name is only possible if we know what will happen in the story I think... plottwists, people etc. so people could only help with that further in the story. do you have a story thoughtout or do you think it up per chapter?
I like the story, but in ch. 2 you repeated what Harry said about his friends in different words. That Ron isn't his friend and Hermione is still unknown. or at least it seemed that way to me. he said it twice and thought it once... And in the beginning Hermione latched onto Harry once she found him... why did she do that? even if they had been looking for him for a few hours... doesn't seem like her.
anyway, hope for more soon!

yupp, i do love it. please keep it up.

Hmmm! Dumbledore doesn't suspect a thing! Good! Can't wait for chapter 3!

It's intersting that's for sure. I want to read more, I'm intrigued. I want to see where this is going. It's also believeable, I think, Dumbledore's a sneaky old coot. Please Write more!!

Continue!!! I've gotta have chapter 2! Will Hermione stay by Harry's side?

Hey this is very good. Coupla spelling mistakes but nothing that stands out. Storyline is definitely original for a Dumbledore betrayal. Too many storys seem to follow the same lines. This doesnt. Poor Snape Harry better get him out of there. As for a name i'm not sure, only you can really decide that. Cos only you know where you are going with it. Think about the main theme, yes Harry's been betrayed but Snapes been treated worse, he doesnt have a life. I think single word titles are the best, something that gets across all the important things but is simple and easy to remember, like 'betrayal' (which has probably been used alot) or 'hidden'. As for whether pairing or friends, i think the best fics are those where they are both. I definitely want to read more and if you decide on a name before your next update can you let me know? I hate it when i miss new chapters!

Yeah!!!!!! I think Draco and Harry should be a pairing but Draco dom and Harry sub.

Great story!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.